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#274270 - 03/18/17 07:50 PM FDK: State's Evidence - 2/14
Terry Leatherwood Offline

Registered: 06/22/04
Posts: 2375
Loc: Southwest USA
More on the beginning of the road trip. I wonder what will happen between the detective and the witness?

devilsplat or maybe shock or even rotflol?

I guess we'll find out.
After weeks at sea, Captain Fetherstonhaugh and his hardy crew had at last crossed the halfway point, and he mused that the closest dry land now lay in the Americas, assuming of course that it was not raining there.

#274313 - 03/20/17 04:18 PM Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 2/14 [Re: Terry Leatherwood]
Marcus Rowland Offline

Registered: 12/18/05
Posts: 2406
Loc: London, England
Well, it'll be interesting to see how this goes - apart from anything else, they'd probably want to put her into witness protection once the trial is over, which would cause problems for the relationship.
Marcus L. Rowland
Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game

#274335 - 03/21/17 04:46 PM Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 2/14 [Re: Marcus Rowland]
Millefeuilles Offline
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Registered: 08/06/16
Posts: 59
Loc: France
A great instalment! I second Marcus's curiosity. At least, there are some already some very obvious differences with the movie (no train!) and I'm dying to know how this will develop!
I'm hooked, so please don't leave us to languish too long.

#274345 - 03/22/17 02:43 AM Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 2/14 [Re: Terry Leatherwood]
Morgana Offline

Registered: 04/25/10
Posts: 2443
Loc: Somewhere on the East Coast
Road trips have a way of bring out the best and the worst in all of us. Still, Lois and Clark should begin to see good qualities they can bring out of each other. They've already made a start, it takes a lot of courage for Lois to speak out against her husband. Clark is worried about mistakes he's made in the past. Perhaps getting her to Colorado shall smooth over some of those wounds.

Only time will tell.

Oh, glad to see Mayson survived.

Edited by Morgana (03/22/17 02:46 AM)
Edit Reason: Additional comments

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

#274428 - 03/23/17 05:53 PM Re: FDK: State's Evidence - 2/14 [Re: Terry Leatherwood]
groobie Online   content

Registered: 12/15/03
Posts: 1985
Loc: Riverside, California
You're making me want to take a road trip. smile Haven't seen the movie you referred to, so I don't have any preconceived notions of where the story has headed, but I already love that the banter we know between the characters has already started to creep in. What's the posting schedule? Or, feel free to just send me the whole story now...I'm already getting impatient. laugh
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink


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