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#273678 02/16/17 04:27 AM
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I'm terrible at coming up with titles, so forgive the awkwardness of this one.
The muse woke up with a vengeance; I blitzed through 2000 words today! (some on this and some on Unmasked, for those of you waiting on a chapter of it)


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I love this story already! smile


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Great revelation. I look forward to part 2.


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What a different take on the Nightfall story! Lois discovered that Clark is Superman? Boy, when his memory comes back he is going to have some explaining to do.

Glad Lois was being smart about Suicide Slum, that a rough bit of Real estate.


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Thank you everyone smile

I had hoped to get the second half up today, but I'm really unhappy with what I've written and it needs a major rewrite. I'll get it up as soon as I possibly can (probably tomorrow)


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Ooooh. I like the idea that Lois would search out the area where Jimmy and Perry found the swatch of Superman's suit. Now she knows. Now what?


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