Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Register Log In

Lois & Clark Forums Forums Fan Fiction Lois & Clark Fanfic FDK In Your Arms

Print Thread

FDK In Your Arms #273553 02/04/17 01:26 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	This story is a WAFFY angst-free 200 word drabble with no A plot, and not much a B plot either. I did it as a challenge to myself to create a drabble without dark emotions or thoughts and to describe Lois and Clark's thoughts using similar language in the beginning and end. Anyone who wants to take up the challenge is more than welcome to create their own drabble, even changing the criteria to suit yourself. Comments always appreciated! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273556 02/04/17 02:20 PM
Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville
Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France	Beautiful, and straight to the point... You chose to develop one of the most important sentences Clark told Lois at the beginning of their relationship, and that defined that relationship to the end. Quote He explained much later just how close a friend he was and how often around. The mirror effect of the last two sentences is perfect: Quote In his arms I found unconditional love and discovered his secret: that without Clark Kent, there'd be no Superman. Quote In her arms I found unconditional love and discovered my secret: that without Lois Lane, there'd be no Superman. Brava!

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273559 02/05/17 12:06 AM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Thanks Millefeuilles for commenting and your kind words. Glad you liked it. Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273584 02/06/17 06:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,661 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	This was short, simple and beautifully to the point. They need each other now and forever. Thanks for a touch of romance! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273601 02/08/17 02:37 AM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	Short and beautifully done! I really admire how you cut directly to the heart of the matter. I love the duality - how each of them have that mirrored moment of revelation and reflection. They really do need each other, those too. Loved it! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273602 02/08/17 04:27 AM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Thanks Morgana and Deadly Chakram! I'm delighted you both enjoyed this bit of romance so close to Valentine's Day. Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273630 02/13/17 02:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	How sweet. I love the image of Lois relaxing in Superman's arms when all others would've been terrified. How could he not have fallen more in love with her? I love that it took both Lois and Clark to make a Superman. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #273651 02/14/17 09:18 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Thanks, Virginia! In this case, 1 + 1 = 1. (1 Lois) + (1 Clark) = 1 Superman. Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #274285 03/19/17 03:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,948 Likes: 28	Quote In his arms I found unconditional love and discovered his secret: that without Clark Kent, there'd be no Superman. […] In her arms I found unconditional love and discovered my secret: that without Lois Lane, there'd be no Superman. Beautiful juxtaposition! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK In Your Arms Darth Michael #274301 03/20/17 06:40 AM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora OP Features Writer
OP cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 911 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	Originally Posted by Darth Michael Quote In his arms I found unconditional love and discovered his secret: that without Clark Kent, there'd be no Superman. […] In her arms I found unconditional love and discovered my secret: that without Lois Lane, there'd be no Superman. Beautiful juxtaposition! Michael Glad you liked it! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK In Your Arms cuidadora #274336 03/21/17 06:49 PM
Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville
Millefeuilles Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Aug 2016 Posts: 179 France	Originally Posted by cuidadora Originally Posted by Darth Michael Quote In his arms I found unconditional love and discovered his secret: that without Clark Kent, there'd be no Superman. […] In her arms I found unconditional love and discovered my secret: that without Lois Lane, there'd be no Superman. Beautiful juxtaposition! Michael Glad you liked it! What's not to like? It's beautiful!

Moderated by Kaylle, SuperBek

Link Copied to Clipboard

Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5