Hi,
I've finished a 14 pages story and I'd be eternally grateful if one of you English native speakers could have a look at it for ungrammaticality and / or lack of Americanism.
English isn't my first language and the story certainly needs some dusting.
Any plot and character advice would also be appreciated, it the gentle Beta has the time to do so.
I've never written fanfic in the L&C universe, even if I already did in another fandom (I had an English speaker as a Beta).
Thanks in advance for your help.