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FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 #272346 10/29/16 09:44 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder. I really struggled to get this story to work. What you have (hopefully) just read is the fourth version. Here's hoping I got the loose ends tied up tight "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272363 10/29/16 05:48 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Really good story, NK. It begs for a follow-up. r/ Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272411 10/30/16 06:45 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Thanks, Artemis! As for a follow-up... never say never, but I am trying to get some WIPs out of the way before starting on new stuff. "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272500 11/01/16 01:10 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Awww! I loved this . I've been wanting to read it since you posted, but just got the time this morning... Clark asking Lois out was very sweet. That huge grin on his face as she agrees--I could just picture it! And I really enjoyed that even though the Kerths wasn't 'a date', it was pretty much impossible for them to act like it wasn't . You do a wonderful job writing Perry, btw . I really enjoyed the last section with his insight. How he knew--immediately--that things were changing between Lois and Clark. And reading how much he was pulling for his reporters was really touching. They all have such a great friendship. Awesome job!!! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272505 11/01/16 05:30 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Thanks, Laura I tried to model it a little on their 'almost-first date' from The Phoenix... that increased awareness of each other and the ramp up of the romantic tension between them is one of my favourite parts of S2. I discovered when I wrote 'What Perry Knows' that Perry is lots of fun to write- the tough as nails exterior with a heart of gold. Funny thing though, I find myself mentally delivering his lines in a Southern accent. And I tried to pull the stories full circle by ending this one with his viewpoint, as 'Muddying the Waters' started with him in that closet. And now I really must stop playing with the computer and go to my exam... "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272506 11/01/16 06:13 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Oh--I had forgotten that! What a cool idea: to start with Perry and then end back with Perry. Great touch ... Good luck on your exam! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- Changing the Game 1/1 NostalgiaKick #272560 11/05/16 12:38 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Quote He’d noticed the little glances they kept throwing at each other, and the glowing look Lois had worn when Clark had won the award for investigative journalism. If they thought they were fooling him, they were dead wrong. Ha! I can just picture what Perry is observing. Those looks, knowing smiles, the silent connection between two people is sometimes so obvious, even if the couple thinks they're being quiet about their status. You've vividly captured the feeling of a relationship that is new and unsure, but already something that could be headed somewhere solid. Good job! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

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