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FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) #268000 12/19/15 07:10 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Merry Christmas to my fellow LnC fans. Hope you like ... KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268006 12/19/15 09:53 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Sweet. What a nice helping of Christmas snuggling goodness. This is the ending we were missing back in the 90s. It's so wonderful to see them talking through things in a calm loving manner. I'll have to read this again (without the kids interruptous). Happy Christmas to you too! VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268036 12/20/15 11:58 AM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	My first thought on seeing the title is that this story would be a continuation of the afterglow-on-the-ceiling canon scene, and I was wondering how you would pull that off on the gfic side of the MB. Once I had my expectations adjusted, I was still eager to read the story. Quote But … but nobody loves me. How can you love me? Ouch. Such raw emotions. Quote Whenever I have on my glasses I'm hiding my powers, and whenever I have on the suit I'm hiding my identity. I've read many revelation stories, but rarely have I seen this sentiment put so elegantly. Quote he idly wondered how long it would be until they finally did 'joint tax returns' You've done the impossible. You've made me want to file taxes. Brava! Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268042 12/20/15 09:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	I read this early today and now with the quiet of the evening I'm going to read it again. Joint Tax Returns! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) Morgana #268047 12/21/15 12:48 AM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,329 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,329 Tulsa, OK	Originally Posted by Morgana Joint Tax Returns! I agree I just laughed and laughed at that one. Just what he needed to say to keep the edge off of the situation. Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268053 12/21/15 02:43 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Lovely fic. Thanks for letting me be a part of your process. I really hope you become inspired to write Greedy for Even More...the n-side always needs new stories! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) VirginiaR #268128 12/26/15 04:20 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Originally Posted by VirginiaR Sweet. What a nice helping of Christmas snuggling goodness. This is the ending we were missing back in the 90s. It's so wonderful to see them talking through things in a calm loving manner. I'll have to read this again (without the kids interruptous). Happy Christmas to you too! Thank you. Hope you got a chance to read again without kid interruptous. Originally Posted by Lynn S. M. My first thought on seeing the title is that this story would be a continuation of the afterglow-on-the-ceiling canon scene, and I was wondering how you would pull that off on the gfic side of the MB. Ooooo, no. Couldn't manage that! Quote Once I had my expectations adjusted, I was still eager to read the story. Good. Quote Quote But … but nobody loves me. How can you love me? Ouch. Such raw emotions. Mmmm, poor Lois. Quote Quote Whenever I have on my glasses I'm hiding my powers, and whenever I have on the suit I'm hiding my identity. I've read many revelation stories, but rarely have I seen this sentiment put so elegantly. Thanks. I was hoping the readers would appreciate how simply I put it in that sentence. Quote Quote he idly wondered how long it would be until they finally did 'joint tax returns' You've done the impossible. You've made me want to file taxes. What! You don't enjoy doing taxes? Quote Brava! Joy, Lynn Thank you. Originally Posted by Morgana I read this early today and now with the quiet of the evening I'm going to read it again. Hope you enjoyed it as much the second time. Quote Joint Tax Returns! That's supposed to be the funny punch line. Glad you laughed. Originally Posted by Mike M Originally Posted by Morgana Joint Tax Returns! I agree I just laughed and laughed at that one. Just what he needed to say to keep the edge off of the situation. Mike Yay, another one laughing. Originally Posted by groobie Lovely fic. Thanks for letting me be a part of your process. Thank you for being my beta and steering me in the right direction. Quote I really hope you become inspired to write Greedy for Even More...the n-side always needs new stories! I'm trying ... noting down little thoughts. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268156 12/27/15 09:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28	Hi Vic! Quote A different direction the window scene in Seasons Greedings could have (should have!) taken. […] PG-13 Quote They hadn't actually stopped singing, but his mind was no longer processing the sound. I think I might have had this problem once with my computer, too. Not enough free resources, I gather. Maybe Clark should invest in an upgraded brain? Quote He had one arm draped over her shoulder and she'd been resting her head on his shoulder, but she had lifted it when he had lifted his from resting on hers. LOIS: He’s leaving me. Again Quote He imagined drawing her up to him, while slowly bending down. It was so real in his mind that he could feel the soft touch of her lips and then the gasp of air when they would part. He would slide his hand round her waist and then down to her hip, drawing her into his body, bringing them closer, letting them touch. She would moan and her hands would push up his chest to link around his neck. He could even imagine the tentative flick of her tongue over his lips. Down boy. Quote A deep moan intruded on his fantasy. The taste of wine on his lips confused him. Quote Although, his warped brain sometimes had Lois push him away, and slap him across the face, in a moment of stark reality. Or shatter her patella? Quote Oh, but he wanted this to be real. And if it wasn’t, then he had finally lost his mind. He'd succumbed to his fantasies, let himself be sucked inside one. I pity the staff who will have to clean up the padded room each day with a Lois-fixated Clark lost in his dreams locked away in there. Quote Lois seemed to understand and she released her arms from around his neck and brought them down to his chest. He could hear her ragged, uneven breathing: a perfect mirror to his own. In breathy tones he confessed his heart, convinced that she finally felt something for him. LOIS: Quote "I love you." It felt so freeing to say those words. His heart felt like soaring above the clouds. He could see his future stretching out before him. A future shared with Lois. Side-by-side, every day, for the rest of eternity. LOIS: Quote Strange, that when they first met, both her heart and her head fought against the idea of Clark - her heart was terrified of being hurt, and her head assumed that he was beneath her. Quote It was perfect. Better. It was heaven. And then he slowly pulled back, taking away the warmth of his kiss. The loss was immediate. How had she lived without that warmth until now? How could she live without it from this day? She looked up into his eyes and saw the warmth she now craved shining from them. "I love you." "What?" she asked warily, narrowing her eyes and pushing gently at his chest. Those three words were a sudden alarm bell ringing in the back of her mind. See? Quote Too afraid to see the face of well-practiced seducer. Quote But … she'd been responding, she'd been touching him, she'd been the one to … use tongue. Surely that wasn't faked. Quote "How dare you presume that we would …" CLARK: How does she get from ‘I love you’ to… Quote "What?" He gasped in incredulity. She was angry with him - disappointed - because he'd told her his feelings! /points at Venus/ Quote Clearly she didn't feel the same. Yet … she'd been wrapped in his arms only moments ago. Was she only interested in a little make-out session? Well…she did jump Superman that one time and there’s the whole Claude-incident… Quote "Do what? Tell you?" he queried. "Yes," came her blank and simple reply. CLARK: Is it past midnight? Did she get wet? Quote "But I guess … I can't hide it anymore." _____ “Yeah, well, keep it in your pants!” Lois turned and stalked away, Quote How could he so blatantly talk about exposing himself? She thinks he wants to show her Superman’s little spaceship Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268157 12/27/15 09:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28	Quote He was just like all the other men she'd ever met, ever been involved with: only after one thing. CLARK: ? Quote She scoffed. "No. To think I’d have sex with you after just one kiss." Well…it was a pretty spectacular kiss, so… Quote "Sex!" he squealed. She didn't think she'd ever heard his voice so high before. Well, she did just emasculate him. Quote I told you I loved you. Where did you get sex from?" LOIS: DUH! … Wait, that feels wrong, somehow. Quote He was gesturing wildly, his voice full of horror, and she began to wonder that she may have slightly misinterpreted the situation. Quote "That's what most men want when they tell a women ... and … well, to be blunt…" she took a breath and looked up into his eyes - pausing, on the way up, at his waist - then looked away. "I could feel … you know." That he was interested in sex? Quote How could one man affect her this way even when she was angry with him? Because her libido is very much interested in sex with him? Quote His voice was earnest and clear, and she began to put aside her idea that he was trying to seduce her into bed. CLARK: There’s a perfectly good sofa over there. CLAUDE: Trust me. The table is more comfortable. Quote His babbling came to an end and he slowed down, speaking softly. "I do want to make love to you. I've spent nearly two years fantasising about being with you. Quote "I wanted to ask you out, and romance you, and spend time with you, and then eventually ask you to-" Yes…? Quote "So, you really told me you love me because …" Her voice was trembling and she worried that a tear was about to roll down her cheek. "I love you." "But … but nobody loves me. How can you love me?" Quote "Just exactly that …" She shrugged her shoulders. "Nobody does. I'm not nice. I'm not loveable." He likes a challenge? Quote . And Jimmy, in a way. He's kind of like a younger brother. LUKE: Quote Then there is friendly love. Again Jimmy definitely comes into that category. And I hope I do too." She already told him that she loves him like a brother. Quote But - not counting the narcissistic self-love See? Someone does love her Quote But after just one kiss … without even dating, that seemed quick To be fair, dating is to get to know the other and they’ve been getting to know each other for well over a year now. Quote But then Lois recognised that she'd actually been against the idea of sex after one kiss only because she'd suspected - for a moment - that sex was the only thing that Clark was after. Also, hormones… Quote If his thoughts were anywhere like hers, then he was probably realising how close they were to that final line. She probably should still very still… Quote There was a small part of him that wanted to grab her, and twist them around so that she was stretched out under him … LOIS: But…I like to be on top… oh, never mind… Quote "when you died." Oops? Quote If he told her now … if she was angry … CLARK: So…no nookie tonight, then? LOIS: Quote "Take off my glasses and undo the top few buttons of my shirt." Quote "Then…" Clark was smiling. Lois loved him - loved Clark, and she knew everything about him now. All his innermost, terrifying secrets were now shared with her. Actually…he still has no practical knowledge on how to please her. Quote "We'd probably be married by now." He could hear the smile in her voice as she gave a little giggle, still snuggled into his shoulder. He brought his arms around her to keep her there. "I think you could be right." Awww… See? Nothing to stop them from Clark not leaving tonight. JONATHAN: Shouldn’t Clark be here by now? Do you think there was an accident somewhere? MARTA: Quote "And you know what married people do together?" Clark heard the return of the teasing tone which Lois had used earlier, when she'd been doing her best to test his control. She lifted her head and gave him a sultry look. Quote "Me too, Clark," Lois returned. As she surrendered to his kiss once more, he idly wondered how long it would be until they finally did 'joint tax returns'. Well…the IRS deadline is somewhere around Easter, isn’t it? What an adorable…erm…steamy holiday fic Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Greedy for More (1/1) KatherineKent #268384 01/04/16 06:31 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	What a lovely story to read this afternoon . I really admire how they both stuck to it, stayed in the conversation, let truths be known. Even through misunderstandings. Even though being totally honest was a bit scary. They both know everything now, and are both free to love each other. 'Joint tax returns'--the perfect line to end it on. LOVE it!!! Awesome job! Laura Last edited by LMA; 01/04/16 06:32 PM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

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