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FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 #267804 12/07/15 07:36 PM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Feedback folder "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #267813 12/07/15 10:10 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	A www! What a fun, sweet story! See, something did come from Miranda's perfume. Love the final line, it pulled everything together. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #267815 12/07/15 11:17 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana HappyGirl Top Banana
HappyGirl Top Banana Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 1,194 Likes: 1 Northern Indiana	I love it! Such a Lois Lane leap of intuition; I dreamed it, and then you said it, so it must be true. She's right that that's flimsy evidence, but by that point he'd already confessed. Someone needs to buy Clark a poker face for Christmas. I also loved how his tie morphed into the Suit in her dream. Thanks for playing, and for sharing! This is my happily ever after.

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #267817 12/08/15 01:16 AM
Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia N NostalgiaKick OP Features Writer
OP NostalgiaKick Features Writer N Joined: Oct 2013 Posts: 825 Toowoomba, Australia	Thank you! This was my first (completed) challenge fic and I had a lot of fun with it. Originally Posted by HappyGirl Someone needs to buy Clark a poker face for Christmas I laughed so hard at that and it's so true! His poker face is terrible. Last edited by NostalgiaKick; 12/08/15 03:23 AM. Reason: Stupid autocorrect "It means never having to play it cool about how much you like something. It's basically a license to proudly emote on a somewhat childish level rather than behave like a supposed adult. Being a geek is extremely liberating."- Simon Pegg

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 HappyGirl #267821 12/08/15 02:19 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Sweet story. The Clark in the comics does a better job of hoodwinking Lois whenever she accuses him of being Superman than most of the Clark Kents in the stories on the boards. As a big fan of the dream motif revealing the truth, I cannot help but adore this story and Lois's subsequent jump in logic. Originally Posted by HappyGirl Someone needs to buy Clark a poker face for Christmas. Terrific idea. Maybe even for another story. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #267825 12/08/15 12:19 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Awesome--I really enjoyed his story ! And what a great idea...using the line in Lois' dream to connect to Clark's whistling song. Then, like was mentioned, closing the story by using the line again. Such a great full-circle piece. Oh--and have to agree--Clark's tie morphing into Superman colors was a very great visual. Fantastic! Great job! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #267828 12/08/15 05:13 PM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA F Framework4 Kerth
Framework4 Kerth F Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,018 Portland, Oregon, USA	Delightful, great fun. Framework4

Re: FDK- A Musical Revelation 1/1 NostalgiaKick #268436 01/06/16 01:48 AM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 55 Nashville IncompleteSong Freelance Reporter
IncompleteSong Freelance Reporter Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 55 Nashville	Freaking adorable!! And I loved how the song lyric was woven in throughout the story. Lois and Clark both seemed very much in character. Great job! ~Monica~ "Being with you is stronger than me alone."

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