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Written and posted on my phone.

Interesting! I was pretty confused after reading part 1, but this part clarifies the situation nicely. I guess the universe swapping part is still a mystery

LOL! Poor kid. His powers manifest and his parents have been kidnapped. Worst day indeed!

Poor Lois and Clark! Especially Clark. Having to deal with this while Lois isn't yet in the know.

More please!

Did the kid just learn that Clark suspects how he set things on fire? Have Lois and Clark told their son about his true heritage or have they kept him in the dark? If they kept him in the dark and he's learned that he can shoot laser beams from his eyes (like a certain hero his mom used to hang out with), no wonder this day sucks royally. He thinks that his mom cheated on his dad, AND they aren't there for him to confront and get answers from. Plus, this terrifying thing happened to him and he doesn't know what to do and his parents aren't there to reassure him. On top of all that, his mom naturally thinks his guilty. (Really, Lois, must you pick this moment to channel your father?) Then, he also learns his mom isn't the person he thinks she is (a strong witch with a b, more like it). Worst day ever, is an understatement.

I hope that Clark has a talk with the kid and gets him a pair of leaded glasses and reassures him everything will be all right, even if Lois isn't up to the task.

I can tell that Clark's excited about the prospect of having a son who's just like him. (I'm sure he'll try to not think too much on the fact that this kid is a product of him and Lois.) He's FINALLY not alone in the world.

If Lois brings up Lex again, I give Clark permission to smack her one. Or show her the old headlines where saying what a crook Lex Luthor was! Yeah. That second one will shut her up quicker. Nothing like proving Lois wrong. Especially if the article is written by none-other than herself, because then she can't argue with the results without being wrong either way.

I'm not sure how Asabi's involved in their time-travels or how they even know about his powers. Are we ever going to learn about what happened to this dimension's REAL Lois and Clark?

Exciting stuff!

Oh, and imagine if Lane doesn't know about his dad's super-ness. And poor Clark spills the beans. I can't get the Friends episode where Chandler tells the kid he's adopted (when he and Monica ate getting adoption information from the kid's parents) out of my head!

Good example! In this case, I think Clark SHOULD tell the son about his Dad, so that the son knows his mom didn't cheat on his father with Superman, and because Lane will know he has someone he can turn to and trust to answer questions. Otherwise, Clark will have to come to Lane as Superman to answer his questions which will cause more problems. As in, how Superman knows glasses will work to help with his vision problem if he doesn't wear glasses himself?

I'm hooked. Poor Lane: Having a new power kicking in, being suspended as a result (because he sure can't tell the teacher, "But I only looked at it and it caught fire"), and then finding out his parents are -- elsewhere -- for who knows how long. I hope that at least this wasn't the first power to manifest itself, and that he knows that he comes by these abilities honestly.

I wonder whether Clark will tell his Lois all, or whether he'll just let her think that her counterpart had had an affair with Superman (or, at best, had had sex with him before she married Clark). Assuming she doesn't figure things out on her own, those seem to me to be the only real options open to Clark. (I can't see him convincing here that their counterparts had an "open marriage" arrangement, or anything even kinkier.) None of those options would be the least bit appealing to him.

I'm intrigued. Do you have a posting schedule in mind?

Joy,
Lynn

Very nice. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Thanks for the fdk, guys. There's no posting schedule as of yet, but I'll try not to be too long between updates. ^_^

Yay--more story !

And poor, poor Lane. What-A-Day...

Really like this--looking forward to more,
Laura

CLARK JR.:
CLARK SR:
LOIS: Clark! Why aren’t you more angry?
CLARK SR:
CLARK JR:

Oh boy, the poor boy.
TEMPUS:



Afraid he’s going to set his ‘father’ on fire, now that he’s figured out his Momma cheated on his Father with Superman?

Can someone be in love with a story?

Yes, like running around in public while wearing tights.

LOIS: Glasses? Why on Earth are you getting him *GLASSES*?

Okay, I’m guessing they’re still 26-ish. How old was Lois when she got knocked up by Superman?



Superman’s lovechild?

Slept with a hick while visiting the heartland?



No way!
LANE: Lois Lane is my mother. Superman is my father. Don’t you think I can figure it out when I’m being brought home by look alikes? Duh! So, You two clones? From the past? Alternate universe? You don’t *smell* like robots, so you can’t be some of Grampa’s inventions.

:cap: Wait, how does Clark know Tempus? Or that Asabi does Soul magic?

LOIS: Dinner is ready!
LANE: You *said* you don’t mean me any harm…

LOIS: You bet we do!

Finding out his mother shagged Superman and then that his mother and his father got swapped out. Priceless!

Michael