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Zabedee's Sons-take two comments #8099 11/18/03 04:04 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa merry OP Features Writer
OP merry Features Writer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 767 usa	Anne, nicely done merry

Re: Zabedee's Sons-take two comments merry #266312 09/26/15 10:46 AM
Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California Annie B. Top Banana
Annie B. Top Banana Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California	I just read this, having found it as a result of the thread about reading and searching for older posts. Nicely done, especially the revision, and the two teenagers seem very true-to-life. I like Dr. Klein's solution to their infertility problems, too. For anyone who wants to read this story: Zebedee's Sons "Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad." "How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice. "You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.” - Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

Re: Zabedee's Sons-take two comments merry #266447 10/04/15 05:50 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Lois Lane stood on the dock with the other reporters and television cameras. Checking her watch, she saw that it was almost 10:00 as she pulled her wool coat tighter against the bitter February wind. She moved closer to the front of the crowd and turned on her micro tape recorder as Police Commissioner Maggie Smith raised her hands for attention. This story was a neat little surprise. The opening paragraph says a great deal with very few words and the writer's economic, yet descriptive style was seen throughout with good effect. Thanks for bringing this gem to our attention AnnieB! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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