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YAY!!! You posted it!
/me runs to see exactly what changes were made
Love it as always and can't wait to see where you go from here!
/me looks impatiently at inbox/IM window
Where is it?!
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Her insides were wrestling like a bunch of kittens fighting over a ball of yarn, but her exterior was prime yoga poster board pin-up material. You do have a way with words. Another solid part. I'm enjoying them. E
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Yay!!!! Lois marked Clark's neck!!!  Please, please, Missy, let Lois get some photo evidence of Clark and Superman appearing in public with identical crosses (or better yet, little hearts) on their necks! Oh, she knew she was playing dirty, and hopefully someday soon, she'd have the full rights to tease him this way, but for now, her adorable bit of pocket lint deserved every uncomfortable moment she could give him. Her adorable bit of pocket lint!!! I love it!!! That was just great, Alisha! I'm so ready for part five! Ann
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Very cool story, great humor, looking forward to more! 
Jayne Cobb: Shepherd Book once said to me, "If you can't do something smart, do something RIGHT!
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LOL Lois is too funny. I love the I have to return a video line. And the little ink mark reminds me of another fic called ink marks the spot. I think it was by Wanda but I am not sure. This is wonderful! More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Hah, loved the ending! Makes me wonder what Clark thinks if he can shake out of his stupor long enough to realize that Lois just used one of his excuses. And Mayson...well she can go away or something. :p Great part, looking forward to more!
JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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I love this story! Please post more soon.
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Suddenly the world blurred as he felt a warm wet sensation on the top of his ear.
“Later, partner,” she whispered in his ear. “I have to return a video.”
The tiny flick of the pen marking his neck didn’t register. So was the 'warm wet sensation' Lois sucking/licking his ear to distract him or was that the pen marking him? Hmmm... to me pens don't feel warm or really wet so I'll just imagine that was Lois licking him or something like that. Yup. That's what is was. :p BTW, I'm loving this story Missy! Keep it coming!!!
A government which robs Peter to pay Paul can always
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This is a really great story can't wait til the next part.
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Oh this is great! What a cute and unique way to go about finding out who he really is. I also love the return a video line. So funny! Can't wait for more.
Jackie
Superman: I hear you've been looking for me.
Lois: All my life.
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I just read this, please tell me more is coming soon. Glad to see another we don't like Mayson around Clark story. No Dan please!
Can't wait to see what you have up next for the big guy.
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loved it. lois is hilarious
Lois: Clark, you don't have to be embarrassed. That's what friends are for. Just tell me how much.
Clark: Lois, I want you to go out with me!
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I love this! Lois cracked me up, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Any hope of the next part coming soon? I enjoyed rereading it this morning.
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*Looks around shamefully at the fact that no FDK was left here before*
Lois going after Clark's secret ID.
Great plot. More please.
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The images you use in this are hilarious. My favorites: "Oh god! She’s was losing him! To a long-legged python with blond hair!" "...like a raccoon caught in a garbage bin." I'm looking for more. Sex, Lies and Clark by Missy Gallant TOC
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It is a shame she never finished the story. It had a great beginning...
Mike
Create all the happiness you are able to create.
Remove all the misery you are able to remove.
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