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#265541 08/15/15 10:54 AM
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We're building to the final act now. Hold on to your hats - it's going to be a bumpy ride!

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So sorry...I thought I had already left feedback on this one.
Good advancement of the plot. I'm glad that Lois gave Clark a measure of honesty about what had happened to her (though, of course, she was motivated to do so by her need to get him to help recover her children). And I really like the conflict that Lucy must feel: she met Clark while Clark was searching for Lois, she started to fall for him, she can sense that Lois has some feelings for Clark, and Clark for Lois, and she loves her sister, but wants him for herself. So twisty! smile


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