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FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? #264925 07/21/15 07:35 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany	Please leave some feedback. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #264930 07/21/15 10:54 AM
Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719 L L Columnist
L Columnist L Joined: May 2003 Posts: 719	Love this story! Happy honeymoon!! Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #264936 07/21/15 03:09 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany	Thank you very much! This is what I'm going to see tomorrow evening. Beach It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #264939 07/22/15 04:51 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	I like that Lois has Lucy to talk to in this story. I think the show could have used that character much more effectively. Lois doesn't have any close friends to talk to other than Clark, so she doesn't have a sounding board when she is having conflicted feelings that she needs to work through (until she starts seeing Dr. Friskin). Lucy could have been the girlfriend that Lois needs. I hope that Clark sees that Lois doesn't betray his secret, that she has earned a measure of trust. He needs to come back and talk to her! Congratulations on your wedding, and enjoy your honeymoon. Maybe it will inspire you to contribute to the nfic side of the boards. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #265032 07/27/15 10:40 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Hope you had a wonderful time on your honeymoon, bakasi! Wonderful part . I, too, kept waiting for Clark to walk through those elevator doors. And I'm loving those little hints--small acknowledgements to herself that Lois really does have some sort of connection to Clark, maybe even some feelings for Clark . Those moments with Lucy were really great--Lois does need someone to talk to--normally it IS Clark, times like this though it would have been nice if the show used Lucy how you are using her, giving Lois a real connection to her sister. Can't wait for more... Laura Last edited by LMA; 07/27/15 10:43 AM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #265037 07/27/15 06:34 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	I agree about Lois' relationship with her sister. So glad they are on a more friendly basis as they were in the short time that Elizabeth Barondes was on the show. Looking forward to reading the next part. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: ... I Knew The Truth 4/? bakasi #265301 08/07/15 04:56 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,507 Likes: 29 Germany	Thank you all for your nice feedback. I've had a very nice time, going for long walks and riding the bike. Now I'm back and full of energy to go on - well, mostly full of energy. There is a heat wave here that makes me kind of lethargic. Clark anywhere around? It's never too dark to be cool.

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