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FDK: The Pie (1/1) #264587 07/05/15 12:43 PM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	Comments?

Re: FDK: The Pie (1/1) Lois_Lane_Fan #264593 07/06/15 12:59 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Good job! I especially liked the paragraph with Perry near the end. It sounds like he definitely learned his lesson from Alice ( : Perry). Lois better watch out...Cat will be in fine form next July! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: The Pie (1/1) Lois_Lane_Fan #264654 07/07/15 08:48 PM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	Thanks, LMA. I'm glad you enjoyed that paragraph. It was partially based on a true story my grandmother once told me about my grandfather angering her by asking her to cook something the way his mother cooked it. She didn't end up throwing a pie in his face like Alice did, though.

Re: FDK: The Pie (1/1) Lois_Lane_Fan #268553 01/10/16 02:54 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,944 Likes: 28	Hi Lois_Lane_Fan! Quote For each person who had attended the event, it had been mandatory to bring at least one item. So, who all his hoping Lois won’t be attending? Quote Clark let out a bit of a snicker himself, but then he stopped when he noticed that Lois wasn't laughing. So…oops? Quote Lois took a deep breath and replied, "Oh, I can think of one other thing my pie is good for." Quote "And what would that be?" Cat smirked. Maybe she should now duck. Quote "Two can play at that game, Lois," Cat replied as she reached for her own pie to throw it in Lois' direction. So, that’s why Cat made the chocolate one and Lois brought the banana. Quote Cat took a step back and held up her hands in defeat. "Lois, no. You don't really want to do this, do you?" Turn her into a chocolate banana? Quote The same thing happened to me the time I told Alice that she should learn how to bake from my mother." Oh boy. That counts as a double whammy, doesn’t it? Quote "Laugh it up, Lois. I''ll pay you back next year. Just you wait and see." "Good luck with that, Cat," Los replied, still laughing. So, sequel next year? Fun. I did expect Clark to take the brunt of the pie, though That way, Lois could remove the chocolate from his face with…well… Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: The Pie (1/1) Darth Michael #268581 01/11/16 11:39 PM
Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA L Lois_Lane_Fan OP Columnist
OP Lois_Lane_Fan Columnist L Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 720 Indiana, USA	Hi Michael! Thanks for the feedback. Originally Posted by Darth Michael Hi Lois_Lane_Fan! So, sequel next year? Oh, I always leave a bit of an idea for a sequel open just in case I decide to write one. Quote Fun. I did expect Clark to take the brunt of the pie, though That way, Lois could remove the chocolate from his face with…well… That would have been an interesting direction to take the story.

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