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Sorry for the late post. I went picking blueberries this morning.

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For those joining the party late here are the links so that you can catch up:

This series consists of the following:

The Green Green Glow of Home – Matchmaker Style
Pheromone My Lovely – Matchmaker Style
Honeymoon In Metropolis – Matchmaker Style
All Shook Up – Matchmaker Style
Witness- Matchmaker Style
Illusions of Grandeur – Matchmaker Style
Ides of Metropolis – Matchmaker Style
The Foundling – Matchmaker Style
The Rival – Matchmaker Style
Vatman – Matchmaker Style
And
Fly Hard – Matchmaker Style

Wow, now we are getting somewhere! Very powerful chapter and a much more in character portrayal of Lois than the series provided. I always thought she caved to Lex much quicker than the fiery, single minded, hard nosed reporter she was would have done.

Excellent chapter.

Mike

Oh man! It is so good to look inside the character's minds. This is better than the original episode!

My only quibble is that Jack might not have been shaken, more like angry. Luthor tipped his hand when he asked Lois about him. Since when does that man concern himself with a copy boy?

Next!

Mike,

Thanks for the FDK!

I always thought that in the series, Lois was a bit, actually more than a bit too gullible.

I'm glad that you are liking this little treatment of a familiar story. Hang onto your hat. More twists and turns ahead.

Hi Morgana,

Thanks for the FDK!

I'm glad you think so highly of my characterizations.

Jack was shaking, but Lois wasn't sure why. I like you believe that it wasn't fear, but anger. He voiced it when he asked if Luthor was the one that had killed Clark. Jack, Jimmy and Clark had really gotten close by this time.