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Well, talk about your awkward dinners... devilsplat


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Awkward, but thankfully accomplished eek.

I have to agree with Clark--it, overall, went better than I would have thought it might. You did a great job of writing Sam and Ellen. Their reactions were spot on. Ellen was perfect. So smart of Lois to do it all at once...one meal, one explanation. Pull the band aid off quick wink.

I really loved how Lois stood up for Clark, rallied for Clark. Wonderful to see. But also, I loved how she was so adament in her choice--they are happy about the pregnancy, this is what they want to do. Lois has come a long way clap.


Clark looking at engagement rings was lots of lovely WAFF. Any time talk of marriage comes up, I find myself really excited for them, also. I hope that the right time is fairly soon, cause Clark is just dying to pop the question hyper.

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As he stepped through the terrace door into his bedroom, he could see Lois fast asleep in his bed, the book he'd given her open and laying across the bump of her belly. He smiled, feeling Lois' warmth and love envelope him even though she was not actually awake to talk to him and put his mind at ease. He spent several long minutes just watching her sleep, transfixed by her beauty and the knowledge that, somehow, incredibly, she loved him. Not Superman and all he could do, but Clark, the man with simple farmland roots. He shook his head in the dark, wondering, again, how he'd gotten so lucky.

Then, aware of how the smell of the fire still clung to him like a morbid second skin, he quietly extracted some clothing from his drawers and headed off to shower. Inside, he turned the water on as hot as it would go, then proceeded to scrub his body down with a moisturizing soap that he'd picked out for the slight coconut scent it had. Once he was sure that the smell was gone from both his skin and his hair, he dried and dressed. He slipped into the bed beside Lois, flipped onto his side so he could watch the even way her chest rose and fell with breath, then, feeling more content than he had in what felt like ages, he dropped off to sleep.

Beautiful notworthy. I was really hoping Lois would stay--especially when that fire got as bad as it did. I love how in each chapter they really are becoming closer and closer, more in love. It's heart-warming. That despite what they've had to endure these last weeks and months, it all has brought them even closer.

Wonderful chapter, DC smile
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"Where's Clark?" "Right here."

...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.

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Hi, Laura! wave

Thank you for the praise. Writing Sam and Ellen is always a little frightening for me, trying to make sure I get their voices right. So I'm glad to know it worked for you.

Poor Lois and definitely poor Clark for the double assault though. I don't envy them this dinner!

I loved being able to have Lois stand up for Clark, especially on the heels of him being suspended for standing up to Ralph on Lois' behalf. It felt sort of full circle.

You can wait a bit for the proposal though, right? laugh


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You can wait a bit for the proposal though, right? laugh

Awww, man! Yeah.....I suppose love. (You better be the one to break it to Clark, though wink ).


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That dinner actually went better than I expected. Brownie points to Ellen for not behaving atrociously. wink I love that Clark just naturally slipped into bed at night, as if sleeping next to Lois was their default...just hope she reacts well when she wakes up!


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Originally Posted by LMA
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You can wait a bit for the proposal though, right? laugh

Awww, man! Yeah.....I suppose love. (You better be the one to break it to Clark, though wink ).

LOL! Clark knows. He's not happy with me, but he knows.


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Originally Posted by groobie
That dinner actually went better than I expected. Brownie points to Ellen for not behaving atrociously. wink I love that Clark just naturally slipped into bed at night, as if sleeping next to Lois was their default...just hope she reacts well when she wakes up!

I'm glad you caught that! It IS their new normal. They're getting closer and more comfortable with each other, and the Superman secret fiasco is now completely in the past for them both.


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