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Feedback goes here, please. My muse loves you!
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Kerth
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Good showdown with Corbin. I believe Henderson secretly knows/suspects Clark's secret, so I like when stories have him quietly protect it without outwardly acknowledging it. I certainly understand Lois' point about wanting to spend time with Clark, just like any other normal couple, but I, personally, wouldn't mind some super takeout.  Waiting for part 21...
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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Good showdown with Corbin. I believe Henderson secretly knows/suspects Clark's secret, so I like when stories have him quietly protect it without outwardly acknowledging it. I certainly understand Lois' point about wanting to spend time with Clark, just like any other normal couple, but I, personally, wouldn't mind some super takeout. Waiting for part 21... Interesting that you think that about Henderson. I hadn't really planned on him knowing or not knowing. I do, however, believe Perry (in this story) suspects, if not knows for sure. Thanks for continuing to read...
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Top Banana
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Trying to catch up today  ... Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it  . The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together. Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment  Laura
"Where's Clark?" "Right here."
...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.
~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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Trying to catch up today ... Awesome part, DC. Great fight scene--so much more detail than on the show. I really love how you've brought Corben into the story, developed him and the whole story of Metallo. I've very much enjoyed it . The moments between Lois and Clark were wonderful. I love the comfort and support they recieve from each other. And how Clark can finally completely be himself. It's really heartwarming to see them together. Love the story--a big fan. Can't wait till the next installment Laura Thank you! Glad to hear that you are still enjoying the story. I rather liked getting to write in a fight scene or two with Metallo.
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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