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Finally! The long awaited date!
Also, Happy Easter/Passover, FoLCs! And if you aren't celebrating either one, happy weekend!
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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What a beautiful date. I absolutely loved it. And the goodnight kiss... *sigh*
Can't wait for more
KatherineKent/Victoria
Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?"
Lois: "I think so."
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What a beautiful date. I absolutely loved it. And the goodnight kiss... *sigh*
Can't wait for more Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it - the date was a lot of fun for me to write.
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Awwww! What a beautifully WAFFy part, DC. I read it, and immediately afterwards had to read it again  . So sweet, so romantic. And also, so very true to character. I'm really enjoying all of your moments as you bring Lois and Clark closer in this story. The dialog was really wonderful, too--you had such a great blend of friendship, comfort, teasing, and feelings escilating. The perfect chapter to start the weekend with  . Excited to see how they spend their day tomorrow. Happy Easter to you, too! Awesome job  Laura
"Where's Clark?" "Right here."
...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.
~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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That was beautiful ... much better than their first date in canon.
"Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad."
"How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice.
"You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.”
- Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland
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Awwww! What a beautifully WAFFy part, DC. I read it, and immediately afterwards had to read it again . So sweet, so romantic. And also, so very true to character. I'm really enjoying all of your moments as you bring Lois and Clark closer in this story. The dialog was really wonderful, too--you had such a great blend of friendship, comfort, teasing, and feelings escilating. The perfect chapter to start the weekend with . Excited to see how they spend their day tomorrow. Happy Easter to you, too! Awesome job Laura  Thanks, Laura! Wow, that's some high praise. I really did like writing the date, and I guess that spilled over into the final product. I think L&C are so perfect together precisely because of the blend that you mentioned. Hope you don't mind a (small) jump in time - we don't see date #2 because we still have a lot of ground to cover with this story.
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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That was beautiful ... much better than their first date in canon. Thank you! It's much nicer when there are no slamming doors involved, isn't it?
Battle On,
Deadly Chakram
"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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So sweet! WAFF-central!  Loving, emotional, honest, with genuine feelings spelled out in their kisses. So romantic! It's wonderful that they're not hiding from each other in your story...things could have gone so wrong after their pheromone-induced night, but by being open in their communication, they've been able to come closer together. That's really great.  Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians.
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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Happy Easter to you too, dear! Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians. Thanks! I'm one of them... In pasta we trust! But the poor man looked lost. Clark looked at the badge with the man's name, which was pinned slightly askew on his black vest. It stated that the waiter's name was Angelo.
"Is it easier if I speak Italian?" Clark asked, hoping to be helpful. Ha! You don't fool me... I'm positive that the guy was absolutely capable to take the order, but Clark had staged the thing so he was able to seduce Lois speaking the sexiest language in the world... Not that I blame him for that! Thanks for the WAFF!
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So sweet! WAFF-central! Loving, emotional, honest, with genuine feelings spelled out in their kisses. So romantic! It's wonderful that they're not hiding from each other in your story...things could have gone so wrong after their pheromone-induced night, but by being open in their communication, they've been able to come closer together. That's really great. Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians. Thank you! Lois and Clark in dating-mode are just too cute - the genuine feelings, the awkwardness, the best friendness. Miranda's perfume really only accelerated the physical aspect of their relationship (and only the one time) - but, as you said, at least that night didn't wreck things. Pasta, you say? Mmmmmmmmmmmmm!
Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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Happy Easter to you too, dear! Happy Holiday, to all of my fellow Pastafarians. Thanks! I'm one of them... In pasta we trust! But the poor man looked lost. Clark looked at the badge with the man's name, which was pinned slightly askew on his black vest. It stated that the waiter's name was Angelo.
"Is it easier if I speak Italian?" Clark asked, hoping to be helpful. Ha! You don't fool me... I'm positive that the guy was absolutely capable to take the order, but Clark had staged the thing so he was able to seduce Lois speaking the sexiest language in the world... Not that I blame him for that! Thanks for the WAFF!  Glad you enjoyed it! WAFF is so much fun!
Battle On,
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"Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent
"One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon
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