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FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 #262094 03/28/15 10:56 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	It's been six months in coming, but the final chapter is here. As has been mentioned in the past, feedback equals love. European Engagement ring Abrihet's engagement ring is on the second page #ER222BS Last edited by Morgana; 03/29/15 06:48 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262111 03/29/15 04:07 PM
Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida KenJ Pulitzer
KenJ Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2010 Posts: 3,883 Pensacola, Florida	Morgana, As you know, I don't usually comment on a story I'm involved with, but there are exceptions. This story has been a long time in the crafting and, personally, I believe that it is excellent. You have succeeded in tying up the loose ends of the previous stories nicely, going all the way back to "A Lovely Smile" the unlikely start of a multi-part saga. I am very happy that you have allowed me to be a part of this story. Your readers are in for a rare treat. Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found here kj

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262112 03/29/15 04:08 PM
Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California Annie B. Top Banana
Annie B. Top Banana Joined: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,114 California	So ... Lois is Ultrawoman permanently now. Did she and Clark meet up with the Newtrich sisters and their red K again, or was it simply later than in canon? Oh, and Lex actually being somewhat content with his life on New Krypton?! The plot thickens ... maybe Zod should watch his back! "Oh, you can’t help that," said the Cat: "we’re all mad here. I’m mad. You’re mad." "How do you know I’m mad?" said Alice. "You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn’t have come here.” - Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262133 03/30/15 02:52 PM
Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 233 France S Sydney Hack from Nowheresville
Sydney Hack from Nowheresville S Joined: Apr 2004 Posts: 233 France	Yes! You posted! I love the proposal in the Pont des Arts! And Bernie is very romantic... Do you know what is one of my favorite quotes? Quote Oui Bernhard! Oui!” Abrihet began to actually giggle like a young girl so great were the feelings that thrilled through her body. Sydney Non ! non, c’est bien plus beau lorsque c’est inutile ! (Edmond Rostand)

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 KenJ #262146 03/31/15 08:22 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	KenJ Quote Morgana, As you know, I don't usually comment on a story I'm involved with, but there are exceptions. This story has been a long time in the crafting and, personally, I believe that it is excellent. You have succeeded in tying up the loose ends of the previous stories nicely, going all the way back to "A Lovely Smile" the unlikely start of a multi-part saga. I am very happy that you have allowed me to be a part of this story. Your readers are in for a rare treat. Thanks for making this the exception! Where would I be without your patience and skillful beta guidance? This has been a long journey, A Lovely Smile and the other stories were written separately, but at your suggestion they have become a multi-part saga! More to come! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Annie B. #262147 03/31/15 08:30 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	AnnieB Quote So ... Lois is Ultrawoman permanently now. Did she and Clark meet up with the Newtrich sisters and their red K again, or was it simply later than in canon? Oh, and Lex actually being somewhat content with his life on New Krypton?! The plot thickens ... maybe Zod should watch his back! All the action with the Newtrich sisters happened a month or so after Lex's 'disappearance'. Lois was hit with the red K ray, but instead of taking Superman's powers she now has them permanently. As Jor-El said, she is now biologically a Kryptonian. Lex is changing and that will be more evident as the story progresses. Zod? Ah, we shall see... Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262148 03/31/15 08:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Sydney Quote I love the proposal in the Pont des Arts! And Bernie is very romantic... No small thanks to you my friend! The pictures of Paris, especially of the Pont des Arts and Nigerian wedding gowns helped shape the flavor of the story. Bernie does have a romantic side, one that only Abrihet will ever see. That's probably why she was giggling! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262189 04/02/15 03:09 AM
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DebbieG Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley	Very cute! (Well, except for the New Krypton part…) The proposal was very nice. Lois is now Ultrawoman permanently? That would make for an interesting side story at some point. It’s interesting to see Lex changing; I’m curious where he’ll wind up. Someone as smart as Lex may recognize that once Zod is on Earth with superpowers, he may turn on Lex, or ignore any promises he’s made.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262193 04/02/15 07:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	LWhite Quote Lovely addition to the saga. I love the bridges with the padlocks in Paris - really beautiful. A nice way to tie up bits and pieces from the series. Thank you. This story occurs just before placing the locks on the Pont des Arts bridge became a tourist 'thing'. So there is no mention of them when Bernie proposed to Abrihet. He probably would have gotten so distracted by the locks and what their additional weight was doing to the bridge, the proposal might not have happened! Drawing the various stories together was fun. When I wrote A Lovely Smile some of the commentors and not a few PM folk asked if I would continue to explore Abrihet's life. Hopefully this trilogy provides the answer and more! Last edited by Morgana; 04/07/15 11:40 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262194 04/02/15 07:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	DebbieG Quote Very cute! (Well, except for the New Krypton part…) The proposal was very nice. Lois is now Ultrawoman permanently? That would make for an interesting side story at some point. It’s interesting to see Lex changing; I’m curious where he’ll wind up. Someone as smart as Lex may recognize that once Zod is on Earth with superpowers, he may turn on Lex, or ignore any promises he’s made. As mentioned previously, Lois will retain her Ultra Woman powers. I was always sorry that UW never returned to the show. Having Clark's powers provided a unique opportunity for Lois to walk in her boyfriend's shoes and understand just exactly what he endured sometimes. It is probably why their relationship was so much stronger after that episode and why Lois decided to marry him. We will see more about Lex's life on New Krypton and why he is reluctant to return to his homeworld. But now that Aykira is around, who knows what will happen next? How will things go with Zod? Someone like Lex always has a backdoor to escape in case things get a little too hot to handle. Remember Foundling? I wanted Bernie's proposal to be smooth. The character is portrayed as shy and nervous, which he was in this instance, but he also lonely especially when the woman he loves is 3,000 miles away. So glad everyone enjoyed watching these two people begin to blend their separate lives into one. Last edited by Morgana; 04/02/15 04:29 PM. Reason: Additional comments Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262259 04/05/15 03:48 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie Kerth
groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	I love Bernie and Abrihet! I'm glad you continued their story. Looks like other loose ends will from previous stories will be tied up here as well. I'll be waiting for the next part. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262262 04/05/15 09:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Groobie It was a lot of fun writing about this couple! It took over two years to tie up the loose ends that started with Ants at a Picnic. Glad you liked the story. There are still a few more twists and turns before Bernie and Abrihet exchange their vows. But don't worry that has nothing to do with them! A certain Kryptonian will be getting in the way. Chapter Two will be up around midnight - maybe. Last edited by Morgana; 04/10/15 06:51 AM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262327 04/07/15 03:40 PM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,529 Likes: 6 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,529 Likes: 6 Brazil - RS	Glad to see the continuation of this fic. Since the beginning I thought this story had potential to go further and become a multi-part tale. Jor-El surviving and meeting Clark is a storyline rarely seen in fanfics and it's always a refreshing theme to explore. You're turning it into an excellent story. About the proposal, who would have thought Dr. Klein could be so romantic? Very sweet! It's good that Lois will be keeping the powers. Ultra Woman was a very interesting character and I was sorry that she just appeared for one episode. She would have been an even better support for Clark, sharing rescues and helping him to fight enemies. And as Lois is not Kryptonian she must not be vulnerable to kryptonite, right? Zod and Luthor together are dangerous! But if Zod comes to Earth at least Clark won't be alone to fight him. And woe to him if he hurts Clark! He will feel Ultra Woman's wrath! Quote Now it was simply a matter of time before Zod’s plan came into play. Except now after nearly a wonderful year of working on the farm among native Kryptonians, Lex’s thoughts and emotions were in chaos, making him reluctant to leave. Could it mean he is changing? Becoming a better person? You've written a more human Lex in your stories and maybe Aykira's presence is a signal that he can be redeemed again. Although now he knows Clark's secret and this knowledge in his hands is scaring. Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262370 04/10/15 07:02 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Ultra Woman Hello there! RL has been a little busy! Its wedding season and another one of my friends is getting ready to walk up the aisle. Kind of reminds me of Bernie and Abrihet. Quote Glad to see the continuation of this fic. Since the beginning I thought this story had potential to go further and become a multi-part tale. Jor-El surviving and meeting Clark is a storyline rarely seen in fanfics and it's always a refreshing theme to explore. You're turning it into an excellent story. clap About the proposal, who would have thought Dr. Klein could be so romantic? love Very sweet! It's good that Lois will be keeping the powers. Ultra Woman was a very interesting character and I was sorry that she just appeared for one episode. She would have been an even better support for Clark, sharing rescues and helping him to fight enemies. And as Lois is not Kryptonian she must not be vulnerable to kryptonite, right? Zod and Luthor together are dangerous! But if Zod comes to Earth at least Clark won't be alone to fight him. And woe to him if he hurts Clark! He will feel Ultra Woman's wrath! splat As mentioned earlier it's taken a little time (plus gentle prodding from a few folks) to pull threads from the various stories to create a whole new series. Yes, adding Jor-El was an extra bonus. Exploring what had happened to him after Krypton exploded was a challenge. Will I expand on it in the future? One never knows! Bernie is a man in love! What better time to step out of your comfort zone? Who says Lois as Ultra Woman is not Kryptonian? As for Lex, he is changing. Being around people who accept him for his work ethnic and personality rather than what they can get out of him has been the key. Aykira's presence? We shall see. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262429 04/12/15 03:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28	Hi Morgana! Am finally getting around to some catching up Quote gotten from Darcy’s Hmm…I’m guessing a fictionalized Macy’s? Quote fit her silhouette to perfection. I’m sure Clark could verify that with his x-ray vision. CLARK: Or my hands… Quote So nice to know she didn’t have to diet anymore, which was one of many perks having Kryptonian DNA bestowed. Oh my. When did that happen? Has it really been this long since the previous story? Quote “Yeah, the new addition to the Kent household in the form of Ultra Woman came as quite a surprise.” And here I thought he was going with a little floating bundle of joy. Quote Good thing that special room behind the bookcase can hold your costumes and mine. To be fair, hers takes considerably less space? Quote “The Newtrich sisters certainly didn’t have that in mind when they used Red Kryptonite on you. What a relief that your powers came back and I kept mine! Now I can help you with rescues.” Aaaaahhh…you twisted it there a bit, huh? Quote The exciting prospects seemed to light her up from the inside and tumbled out in the form of boundless energy. Well…they do say Lois thrives on secrets exposed. Quote There was some speculation that Zara would be forced to end her marriage to General Ching and wed Prince Kal-El. LOIS: Quote This would put an end to all speculation that Clark would lay any future claims to his brother’s position since he had chosen a human as his lifemate. My my my, now with Lois possessing Kryptionian DNA, will be seeing a succession war one or two generations down the line? Or have I watched/read too much Game of Thrones? Quote Somehow visiting the former billionaire in his lavish prison accommodations seemed wrong. So, Lex got a full 6 by 3 feet cell with separate pails for intake and waste? Quote “Tonight. He’s planning on asking her to marry him as soon as he can think of a place that’s romantic enough; According to popular culture, shouldn’t throwing a pebble be enough for that in Paris? Quote “The Eiffel tower is not romantic enough? Please don’t tell me he’s going to propose in one of the Sorbonne’s laboratories or even worse, a conference room!” Quote The simple black box was where it had been only minutes before. I’m wondering if he’s going to have to declare that one at customs. Quote he might have felt the effects of an early autumn chill were it not for the excellent sweater Aykira had knitted for him last year. Huh…love triangle? Quote Bernie sputtered in amazement, he thought that surely she would want to remain in Paris and continue teaching at the Sorbonne. “But …but on the bridge you said your life is here.” Marriage changes things? Or maybe Bernie can take the bridge as an example and build an Einstein-Rosen-Bridge? Or, well, at least patent the Kryptonian one on Earth and get rich off that one… Quote It was precisely for those reasons that she was back in Metropolis. She was untainted by Lex’s corruption and had a proven track record for getting the job done. LexCorp was in the center of a public relations nightmare, who better to take over the helm than someone who had suffered from Lex’s treatment only to come back stronger? So, basically, she’s the perfect fallback for Lex’s agenda? I wonder if she’s his daughter and the whole affair-attempt was just for publicity’s sake? Quote Names as diverse as PhoenixCorp to something called Paragem. How about OmniCorp? Quote The chief warder Zod was of course an irritant, always demanding they talk about the planet’s defenses. He sold weapons and defense systems to the United States Department of Defense, but he had no idea what happened to them once they departed the warehouse. Hmm…Am I sensing some plotting there? Quote Dru-Zod wanted to overthrow the House of El and establish his own kingdom in its place. But to do that he wanted to get to Planet Earth, subdue its people and use them to eventually overrun New Krypton. I don’t think that’s…legal. Quote Months of redundancy caused him to speak with more emotion than he wanted, “This enforced idleness will drive me insane, my life must have purpose!” Couldn’t they provide Lex with bigger stones and a sledgehammer, so he can make smaller stones out of them? Quote “Several months ago, she acquired superpowers like Kal-El’s and is now biologically a Kryptonian. See? I was right. Their offspring will be legitimate heirs to the throne of Krypton. And also, Lex will now ask to become a Kryptonian as well. Quote Lois was unhappy living within such constraints, if she is unhappy than Kal-El will not visit as often. Happy wife, happy life. Quote Except now after nearly a wonderful year of working on the farm among native Kryptonians, Lex’s thoughts and emotions were in chaos, making him reluctant to leave. That’s quite a spin there! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262582 04/18/15 05:27 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Michael Quote My my my, now with Lois possessing Kryptionian DNA, will be seeing a succession war one or two generations down the line? Or have I watched/read too much Game of Thrones? Impressive. My story makes you think of Game of Thrones? I can always depend on you saying something fun and unusual! But yes, as with most of my AU stories, taking a spin on canon is fun! Thanks for the comments. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262622 04/19/15 06:17 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28	Originally Posted by Morgana Impressive. My story makes you think of Game of Thrones? Yeah. I guess political intrigue and GoT have become synonymous Quote I can always depend on you saying something fun and unusual! But yes, as with most of my AU stories, taking a spin on canon is fun! Thanks for the comments. Yeah, my mind really is a weird place. /hushes Muse/ Not now!. Anyhow, I do love taking LnC for a spin. And you're welcome! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: A Wedding in Paris - Part 3 of the Visitor Trilogy Part 1 of 5 Morgana #262686 04/22/15 08:47 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana OP Pulitzer
OP Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Oh, Lois is biologically Kryptonian, but that is as far as Jor-el is willing to go. After all he has another son who will serve as First Lord when he dies. Last edited by Morgana; 10/21/18 08:23 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

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