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FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) #260968 01/28/15 07:57 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie OP Kerth
OP groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Godzilla's Home A short story, for today's quiet boards. Enjoy! You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260971 01/28/15 08:41 PM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	I love Lois debating with herself over what she really feels. It's this, no this, but really -- if she could admit it, it should be THIS. Clark really knocked her off kilter in such a fun way. What an interesting look into Lois's crazy thought process. VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260975 01/28/15 09:07 PM
Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware L Lynn S. M. Pulitzer
Lynn S. M. Pulitzer L Joined: Feb 2010 Posts: 4,393 Likes: 1 Delaware	This story was unprofessional (because "professional" is never as much fun as this story), (sort of) unwarranted (because it was not in response to a challenge), and unnecessary (as are all of the stories here -- my own included)... But I am very happy you posted it. What a delightful peek into Lois's thought processes! Joy, Lynn

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260980 01/28/15 10:13 PM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,328 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,328 Tulsa, OK	This story had me laughing from the first paragraph. I really, truly enjoyed it. I loved the way you edged her feelings about Clark into it, even if she immediately denied them to herself. So VERY Lois! I also enjoyed the last where she commits herself (using the Godzilla toy as a reminder) to making herself worth being a partner with Clark. That really did not come across in the episode. She did complain about it in the next episode (I'm not so scarred, and he's not so exciting) but then that seem to disappear and by the time of GGGOH their partnership just seem to be the normal thing. Well played Susan! Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260982 01/28/15 11:01 PM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Wow-wy! Susan, Susan, Susan!!! This-Was-Awesome! I'm sitting here at our kitchen island...waiting for the kiddos to finally fall asleep upstairs, waiting for the dinner I made ( --husband in about a half hour) to come out of the oven, and waiting for a really late husband to come home from work . And know what? Forgot about everything--and pretty much sat here smiling (from how amazing this story was), gasping in delight (from seriously wonderful word choices and the beautiful flow of your writing), and giggling (from how enjoyable it is to really get 'in' Lois' mind --gotta love Lois! ). I've always really enjoyed this scene in the episode--and how it really seemed to 'level' the field between Lois and Clark a bit, get Lois thinking how Clark really is 'different' from other people (men) that have been in her life. BUT--yeah...I never really thought more about the scene besides that. You gave this step in their partnership so many layers. And (knowing me ), I absolutely loved those little bits where Lois showed us (maybe ) how she is starting to feel about Clark. If I was wearing a hat, it would be totally off to you. Really impressive story--great writing! ... Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260987 01/29/15 11:46 PM
Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Deadly Chakram Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: May 2011 Posts: 6,142 Likes: 2 Connecticut	What a great fic! Love Lois' internal debate - how she wants so desperately to make Clark out to be the bad guy for his prank, but knows in her heart (no matter how she might try to squash it) that she deserved every bit of what he gave her. Great work! Battle On, Deadly Chakram "Being with you is stronger than me alone." ~ Clark Kent "One little spark of inspiration is at the heart of all creation." ~ Figment the Dragon

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #260989 01/30/15 08:09 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Lois followed along her walk of shame, clutching the toy and the remains of her dignity as she made her way from the sewage plant to the Daily Planet. She ascended to the bullpen, oblivious to the curiously terrified faces of the people she passed. She dismissed Jimmy and Cat, offering her attention and explanation to the only person in the room to whom she owed anything. And she stood in front of Clark, covered in stench and betrayal and guilt, with an apology on the tip of her tongue. The scene with Lois walking - er limping into the bullpen after digging around the sewage pits now makes perfect sense! Yeah, Lois deserved that 'life lesson' she did not have to be as mean to others as Claude had been mean to her. Quote Well played, Mr. Kent. Well played indeed and well written! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #261017 02/01/15 03:29 AM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie OP Kerth
OP groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Wow! I'm really blown away by the response to my story. Thank you all, so much! Your positive feedback makes me feel like my time writing and revising it was well spent and encourages me to write more. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #261024 02/01/15 09:36 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,656 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Hey, you should continue with this story, only from Clark's viewpoint. Just a thought. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #261071 02/02/15 05:55 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US M mrsMxyzptlk Columnist
mrsMxyzptlk Columnist M Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 624 US	By the middle, I was starting to think that this was an episode mash-up and Miranda's pheromone had somehow been dumped at the sewage plant. I never really saw Lois as being attracted to Clark quite this much quite this early, but this is an interesting delve into her thought processes as she decides how to react to Clark's prank. "It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #261381 02/16/15 05:51 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 8,941 Likes: 28	Hi Susan! Quote Godzilla’s Home Tokio? Quote Godzilla mocked her. Oh. Metropolis. Quote And the laugh – the full-out, roaring laugh – silently spilling from the child’s toy, Quote The gall of that man! He had set her up, planted this map conveniently into her hands, knowing she would take the bait. Cruel, beyond all belief. Unprofessional, unwarranted, unnecessary payback. Awww…she’s deluding herself Quote Oh, yes, it was payback. This was a deliberate act of retribution, targeted directly at her. TEMPUS: Duh! Quote She had crossed a line – the brightest, most sharply defined line in all of journalism. She hadn’t misstepped or stumbled or accidentally tripped; she had stomped on it forcefully and ground it under her heel. She had stolen his story. To be fair, is it really stealing if he isn’t holding on to it? Is it stealing if you remove the lollipop from a baby? LEX: Only if you have to ply the babies fingers from it. Quote An unprofessional, unwarranted, unnecessary betrayal. I really like that theme! Quote knowing that she was no better than the man who had given birth to the Mad Dog. Lois Lane had screwed Clark Kent. Without the sex, of course. So, actually Clark got the worse deal of the two? Quote How had he done it – worked past the fear of Mad Dog Lane that caused lesser reporters to scatter away from her war path? CLARK: I was supposed to be afraid of her? /checks manual/ Huh, no, I did not deny her chocolate. I also did not date a blonde in front of her. Quote Except for him. Clark Kent’s mud brown eyes stared back – lovesick, pathetic puppy dog eyes, fawning in admiration. Unprofessional, unwarranted, unnecessary adoration. Because she doesn’t deserve his adoration? Quote Or hand him the prize on a silver platter, nodding in deference and waving a white flag. Is she referring to being…wrong? LOIS: What? No. Of course not. Duh! Quote launched twelve inches of molded plastic, and struck his target true. […]He had turned her on. Nah. Can’t be. Quote Silent, deadly accuracy, aimed straight at her heart. Awwww! Quote To have him see that, with one wickedly cruel joke, he had done something that few men had ever done before. He had turned her on. Wow. I did not see that one coming. Which reminds me, I’m a tad behind FDK here. /points at other fic about Lois in danger getting her horny/ Quote That he had put her in her place, but that her mind flashed her bedroom as that place’s location. That she wanted to march to the newsroom, surrender in defeat, and offer herself as his prize. Huh, is this a Shades of Grey homage? Considering what’s said in the news outlets yes, this certainly could fit the bill. Quote God, she was pathetic. Or hard up and horny. Desperate and alone. To have those daydreams about him – the Hack from Nowheresville? Unprofessional, unwarranted, unnecessary thoughts. Very necessary thoughts. CAT: Why I relive those thoughts with regularity. Quote Lois scowled at Godzilla, willing the madness away. She breathed in deeply, nearly gagging on the stench of sewage that surrounded her, marrying the odor of garbage with the mental image of Clark Kent. Oh, so that’s how she did it. How she managed to not jump him for the next three years. Quote Let the hot water slide over her body in a way Superman’s hands probably never would. Couldn’t she try ‘slipping’ in the shower and calling for Superman? Quote She could stand under her shower and close her eyes, letting the hot water touch her in places that Clark never would. Maybe if she asked nicely? Quote A professional, warranted, necessary apology. Awwwwwww! Quote And to someday be honest about her feelings for the man who had given her such a monstrously special gift. Adorable ficlet, Susan. Mixed with unexpected naughty thoughts, too! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Godzilla's Home (1/1) groobie #261386 02/16/15 07:44 PM
Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California groobie OP Kerth
OP groobie Kerth Joined: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,082 Riverside, California	Wow, more feedback! Thanks, everyone! It really makes my day to know that you've read and enjoyed my story. You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.

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