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#258709 10/09/14 06:26 PM
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Finally got to one from one of our main character's points of view! Hope you all enjoyed!

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Two quotes this time, but they go together.

I like the introspection Clark takes on Lois's disparaging comment and how it leads from if Lois will protect the father whom she hates 95% of the time, maybe she'd someday do it for me. clap Very Awwww.


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Do I want a partner who would protect someone she cares about if she found out about their secret?

“Yes, I do,” I say. And for once, that’s not a lie, not an omission, not even an evasion.

It’s the complete and absolute truth.

Having someone like that in Clark's corner is more valuable than gold. Great job Ant-K! I can 'hear' his voice perfectly.


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Thanks, Virginia and Morgana! I did have to use two quotes this time, but I decided it was best to put in Lois's for background, just to let everyone know where Clark's quote was coming from! smile And glad that Clark's voice came through -- hard to tell for sure if it does in less than 500 words, but they're fun to do anyway!

Thanks for reading and commenting!


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