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FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 #258249 09/12/14 06:11 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany	I'm posting this a little earlier, since I won't be home tommorow. Comments go here It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258257 09/12/14 11:17 AM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,329 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,329 Tulsa, OK	You really are going to end it with the next chapter ??? You really ARE . Either that or it is going to be one hell of a chapter. Or you are setting it up for an immediate sequel ... If it truly ends next chapter I will actually be quite disappointed as I am really getting into this story . Mike Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258276 09/13/14 08:33 PM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley DebbieG Beat Reporter
DebbieG Beat Reporter Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 391 Silicon Valley	Only one more chapter? Say it ain’t so! There are an awful lot of plot threads still to be wrapped up; I hope you’re planning a sequel! I have a feeling this Clark will need Lois to help him become Superman, can that really happen in one chapter? Please don’t leave us hanging too long! This is a great story.

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258283 09/13/14 10:44 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,657 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Love it! This is such a totally fresh take on the pilot. Still there was no mention of Claude. Although he was only mentioned once, that episode really shaped Lois' life. Anyhow, please give us a sequel! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258287 09/14/14 05:29 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany	Thank you so much for your kind feedback. Since the Pilot episode is almost over this story will end with the next chapter. But of course there will be a sequel showing Lois' POV. I won't be able to post it directly following this story, I'm afraid. I know that's kind of frustrating for a reader. But I'm not sure I would have gotten this far along in the story if it wasn't for your encouragement and the pressure posting creates. So thank you very much for reading this story. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258309 09/15/14 02:23 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Wow--great chapter, Bakasi! I am really curious to see how you will wrap up part 11 of this wonderful story. As everyone has stated, there is so much going on, so much left to find out. And this is SO interesting of a take on the Pilot. I will be checking often for that next installment down the road. I'm really enjoying this Lois, and it will be fun to see where she takes us . Lana knows. That is BIG. It was a really wonderfully written flashback, and I enjoyed how you ended it, with Clark needing to fly away, and with Lana noticing. The comment Clark made about how he should have told her about the hearing was a nice touch, too. Great! You have me fully enthralled--can't wait for the next part Laura Last edited by LMA; 09/15/14 02:26 AM. "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: Hurt Before 10/11 bakasi #258356 09/17/14 02:04 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany bakasi OP Pulitzer
OP bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,505 Likes: 29 Germany	Just why, oh why, are the first two days of work after a vacation always this crazy? Thank you very much for your feedback, Laura. This means a lot to me. I, too, am very curious what you're going to say about the next part. It's never too dark to be cool.

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