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Hope you liked it. Some of you have been after Clark to do this properly since the Hot Match date!
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Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?"
Lois: "I think so."
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Awwwwww! /wipes away a tear/ How romantic! I'm so glad Clark didn't let any of the frustrating distractions actually distract him from his goal. That man in the boat was a nasty git. A hole in his shoe?  Oh, Clark! I had forgotten that at the end of the previous part Lois had taken off to visit Lucy. You never mentioned where Lucy lived, so I was wondering why Lois was in Gotham. When you mentioned the stuffy greying man waiting in line (or was it behind the counter), I thought it might be Alfred or Nigel, and then wondered if Lois was in Gotham City to see Bruce Wayne. ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/smilie/konfus/k015.gif) Why else go to a city with millions of people in it, right?  Definitely my favorite part so far! So romantic. More please!
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You still like your cliffhangers don't you?? Very good, very romantic(at least in their minds), very Lois and Clark. These kinds of scenes are what made me fall in love with the series and fanfic in the first place  . Next!!! Oh, that's right: Saturday  Mike
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Beautiful.
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"A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly
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He needed a distraction from the pain, the loneliness. She’d been gone less than a day, but it felt like half his soul was missing. ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/traurig/b005.gif) ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/traurig/d020.gif) You should have warned us that this is a death fic! What happened. Lois looked so well. Was her recuperation just a last glimmer of hope before the dreaded 24 hour bug got her in the end? WELLS: ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/liebe/a080.gif) I’m sure I’m on time… Wandering aimlessly he found himself outside a particular shop he’d visited a few weeks ago. Well…now that she’s no more, buying a ring won’t make it better. Maybe if he had bought a chastity ring *before*… It set off thoughts of The Pact. He wondered about Lois’ statement of not focussing on the engagement. It felt like ‘one step backwards’. And yet, they apparently also managed not only to get to third base but to actually do a home run. In fact, if it was ‘one step backwards’ then they’d actually taken two, maybe three, steps forwards - of a different kind, and wasn’t that an overall ‘win’? This depends. If they stood one step in away from the ravine, took one further step back and then three steps forward, well… Lois arrived back in Metropolis late Monday afternoon.  Did Wells pull some mumbo-jumbo? Did he originally replace Lois with a clone before Clark consummated with her and then the curse took the clone? FATES: Is it a new Lois from a different universe? Or, did they clone her and reimplant her soul into the clone? constantly approaching the boarding desk only to be given a frosty look by the tall, stern, greying gentleman who was waiting patiently. What’s Alfred doing at the airport? And why didn’t Clark take Lois back? And isn’t Gotham just across the bay? /points at early S3 eps/ “I guess even super-hearing shuts off when you’re fully engaged in work, Flyboy?” she whispered. He turned and shot up from his seat. Got shocked, huh? I know the feeling when you’re in the zone and someone approaches you. Can stop your heart. “Lois!” came as a growl from his throat. He mad at her? He took her hand and dragged her to the conference room. Huh. Okay, horny, then. . The door was barely shut behind them when she found herself pressed against it. Oh yes. Horny, indeed. FATES:  Clark’s hands were on her shoulders and his head was less than an inch from hers. “I missed you.” He reached up a hand and tenderly pushed a lock of hair behind her ear. Or maybe not… FATES:  As he pressed her against the door, the kiss, which had been sweet and gentle, turned hot and needy. The doors opening into the conference room, right? Otherwise… JIMMY:  Clark bought Lois a hotdog and they sat on a bench looking out over the lake while eating. Why am I finding it so hard? He rested his hand on his thigh and the box in his pocket poked at his wrist. Because traditionally, a proposal happens in a romantic restaurant, not between hotdogs in the park. Maybe that’s the reason why Lois declined his first ring-offer? And that was before you both knew that you felt the same way about each other. Yeah, but earlier it was a contract between business partners. Now, her heart is on the line. He turned to look at her. She was taking a bite of her hotdog. Please tell me he didn’t put the ring onto the dog in the hot. She glanced down at her hand and then casually tossed the last, small piece into the water.  Was that the end where he stuck the ring! Fingering the box in his pocket he made a decision then and a weight left his shoulders. Proposing to Mayson instead would lead to less trouble? “Spend the day with me on Saturday, Lois,” asked Clark. In a chapel? “Let’s just say that there will be a ring involved.” He taking her to Menken’s Gym? Or to some jelly-wrestling place? RALPH: My idea! “Clark!” she blinked. The lethargy infused in her muscles vanished and she suddenly felt full of energy. Realized she’s still in her pre-coffee-state and Clark’s seeing her that way? “Breakfast!” She opened the door the rest of the way and dived for the bag.  “Looking where I was going! Is that what you were going to say?”
Clark held out his arm peacefully. “I just think you should calm down, sir.”
“If anyone needed to look, it was you. Four eyes.” Oh boy. I first expected Clark going overboard and the ring finding its way into a fish, but now…Does that twerp realize that it’s not a good idea to anger a Kryptonian in the middle of a lake while standing on a flammable floatation device? Lois watched in horror as Clark wobbled and then toppled over the side. ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/konfus/g055.gif) The ring! “Lois, I burnt a hole in the bottom of his shoe.” Oh dear. Can you imagine what he’ll do when he finds Lois in bed with Call-Me-Daniel a couple of years down the road? “Um, I guess that’s up to you Lois. You see ...” he coughed. “I, well ...”
“Lois!” came a shrill, high voice from behind. He whipped his head round to see Suzie running towards them. KARMA: I’m a bitch, huh? He looked up and let out a quick puff of air causing the tree branches to shake. Lois let go of his hands and laughed delightedly when the pink blossoms began raining down all around her. ![[Linked Image]](http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v319/tankexmortis/Smileys/th_b55c65b4.gif) “Lois Lane. Will you marry me?”
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ZARA: Hello, Kal-El. Was it as good as you hoped? Let me know. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Michael
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Awwwww. I love Clark. Sure wish he really existed. )-;
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Awww--wonderful WAFFy goodness  ... Loving that Clark proposed, loving also the way he did it. In the park...Under a tree...A tree with beautiful blossoms, no less (great touch--awesome visual  --and oh so romantic!). Very much enjoyed this chapter...feeling Clark's jitters, Clark's anticipation, his excitement. And definitely some fun RomCom distractions along the way (that guy in the boat, though--how mean!  ). And another cliffhanger  ...getting ready to wait it out till Saturday. Can-Not-Wait! Laura
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...two simple sentences--with so much meaning.
~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~
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Finally! After burning a hole in a unpleasant man's shoe and interruption from a co-worker our favorite couple gets to seal the deal. The flower petal shower was a great touch! Only two more parts remain! 
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I love it. I can't recall whether this is taking place at the right time of year (May or so), but I envisioned a Kwanzan cherry tree as the proposal site. Is this what you had had in mind? ![[Linked Image]](http://product-images.highwire.com/1618832/2464223.jpg) Joy, Lynn
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Awwwwww! /wipes away a tear/ How romantic! I'm so glad Clark didn't let any of the frustrating distractions actually distract him from his goal. Nothing could distract him from his goal today. He was gonna propose no matter what! That man in the boat was a nasty git. A hole in his shoe? Oh, Clark! *giggles* I had forgotten that at the end of the previous part Lois had taken off to visit Lucy. You never mentioned where Lucy lived, so I was wondering why Lois was in Gotham. When you mentioned the stuffy greying man waiting in line (or was it behind the counter), I thought it might be Alfred or Nigel, and then wondered if Lois was in Gotham City to see Bruce Wayne. Why else go to a city with millions of people in it, right? Yeah, Lucy is in Gotham. The man in was meant to be behind the counter, just a flight attendant. No-one special. Definitely my favorite part so far! So romantic. More please! Thanks. You still like your cliffhangers don't you?? Oh I love my cliffhangers, but this really wasn't one. You all know what the answer's gonna be. I don't actually class this as a cliffhanger. Very good, very romantic(at least in their minds), very Lois and Clark. These kinds of scenes are what made me fall in love with the series and fanfic in the first place . Next!!! Oh, that's right: Saturday Mike Thank you. And ... it's Saturday!!! Beautiful. Thank you. He needed a distraction from the pain, the loneliness. She’d been gone less than a day, but it felt like half his soul was missing. You should have warned us that this is a death fic! What happened. Lois looked so well. Was her recuperation just a last glimmer of hope before the dreaded 24 hour bug got her in the end? WELLS: I’m sure I’m on time… *sighs and shakes head* Wandering aimlessly he found himself outside a particular shop he’d visited a few weeks ago. Well…now that she’s no more, buying a ring won’t make it better. Maybe if he had bought a chastity ring *before*… It didn't happen, Michael. No matter how much you've wanted it since the prologue, it didn't happen. It set off thoughts of The Pact. He wondered about Lois’ statement of not focussing on the engagement. It felt like ‘one step backwards’. And yet, they apparently also managed not only to get to third base but to actually do a home run. See previous reply. In fact, if it was ‘one step backwards’ then they’d actually taken two, maybe three, steps forwards - of a different kind, and wasn’t that an overall ‘win’? This depends. If they stood one step in away from the ravine, took one further step back and then three steps forward, well… Picky! I guess you are a glass half empty person. constantly approaching the boarding desk only to be given a frosty look by the tall, stern, greying gentleman who was waiting patiently. What’s Alfred doing at the airport? And why didn’t Clark take Lois back? And isn’t Gotham just across the bay? /points at early S3 eps/ Alfred? He was undercover. Don't ask any more. I'm not allowed to say. Gotham is traditionally next to Metropolis (not counting towns, villages, small cities), but they can still be hundreds of miles apart too. “Lois!” came as a growl from his throat. He mad at her? Nope!  He took her hand and dragged her to the conference room. Huh. Okay, horny, then. Yep. As he pressed her against the door, the kiss, which had been sweet and gentle, turned hot and needy. The doors opening into the conference room, right? Otherwise… JIMMY: Yes, the door opens into the conference room. And Lois is pushed against it. By a super strong man. No-one is getting in. Clark bought Lois a hotdog and they sat on a bench looking out over the lake while eating. Why am I finding it so hard? He rested his hand on his thigh and the box in his pocket poked at his wrist. Because traditionally, a proposal happens in a romantic restaurant, not between hotdogs in the park. Maybe that’s the reason why Lois declined his first ring-offer? Nothing has been traditional about their relationship so far!!! He turned to look at her. She was taking a bite of her hotdog. Please tell me he didn’t put the ring onto the dog in the hot. Okay. He didn't put the ring onto the dog in the hot. She glanced down at her hand and then casually tossed the last, small piece into the water. Was that the end where he stuck the ring! I just told you that he didn't put the ring onto the dog in the hot. Fingering the box in his pocket he made a decision then and a weight left his shoulders. Proposing to Mayson instead would lead to less trouble? LOIS: Oh no it wouldn't!  “Looking where I was going! Is that what you were going to say?”
Clark held out his arm peacefully. “I just think you should calm down, sir.”
“If anyone needed to look, it was you. Four eyes.” Oh boy. I first expected Clark going overboard and the ring finding its way into a fish, but now…Does that twerp realize that it’s not a good idea to anger a Kryptonian in the middle of a lake while standing on a flammable floatation device? No. The ring is safe. But the twerp ... isn't. “Lois, I burnt a hole in the bottom of his shoe.” Oh dear. Can you imagine what he’ll do when he finds Lois in bed with Call-Me-Daniel a couple of years down the road? Hide all Dan's Hawaiian shirts? “Um, I guess that’s up to you Lois. You see ...” he coughed. “I, well ...”
“Lois!” came a shrill, high voice from behind. He whipped his head round to see Suzie running towards them. KARMA: I’m a bitch, huh? FATE: But I'm still gonna win. He looked up and let out a quick puff of air causing the tree branches to shake. Lois let go of his hands and laughed delightedly when the pink blossoms began raining down all around her. It's been three days. Have you managed to pull yourself up of the floor yet, and reassemble your molecules out of that pile of goo? “Lois Lane. Will you marry me?”
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ZARA: Hello, Kal-El. FATE: *punches Zara* (turns to Clark) Just ignore her. Carry on ... Was it as good as you hoped? Let me know. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Michael Thanks.
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Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
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Awwwww. I love Clark. Sure wish he really existed. )-; So do I. (Don't tell my hubby I said that.) Awww--wonderful WAFFy goodness ... Loving that Clark proposed, loving also the way he did it. In the park...Under a tree...A tree with beautiful blossoms, no less (great touch--awesome visual --and oh so romantic!). Thanks. It needed to be romantic (but hopefully not cheesy). Very much enjoyed this chapter...feeling Clark's jitters, Clark's anticipation, his excitement. And definitely some fun RomCom distractions along the way (that guy in the boat, though--how mean! ). Yeah. He was very nervous. And of course, the expected RomCom interruptions ... they were very necessary. And another cliffhanger ...getting ready to wait it out till Saturday. Can-Not-Wait! Laura It's not a cliffhanger ... you know very well what the answer is going to be! Finally! After burning a hole in a unpleasant man's shoe and interruption from a co-worker our favorite couple gets to seal the deal. The flower petal shower was a great touch! Only two more parts remain! Thanks. Actually, after tonight, only 1 more part (plus an epilogue ). I love it. I can't recall whether this is taking place at the right time of year (May or so), but I envisioned a Kwanzan cherry tree as the proposal site. Is this what you had had in mind? Joy, Lynn It's never stated what time of year, but Lois had her birthday a few weeks ago. That's traditionally taken as September? I could be wrong there. Anyway, when this was written 2 years ago, the version of Lois had no 'stated' birthday so it can be any time of year you want. But ... that's the kind of blossom I envisioned ... yes.
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Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?"
Lois: "I think so."
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What! It didn't happen, Michael. No matter how much you've wanted it since the prologue, it didn't happen. ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/traurig/a010.gif) It’s like I’ve read a different story… . . .  Picky! I guess you are a glass half empty person. Well…/points at Game of Thrones books/ It’s not *my* fault! Alfred? He was undercover. Don't ask any more. I'm not allowed to say. Yes, the door opens into the conference room. And Lois is pushed against it. By a super strong man. No-one is getting in. LOIS: ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/konfus/c080.gif) Okay. He didn't put the ring onto the dog in the hot. But I didn’t *know* that! I just told you that he didn't put the ring onto the dog in the hot. /see above/ LOIS: Oh no it wouldn't! <does not share well> Bit possessive, much, Lois? Hide all Dan's Hawaiian shirts? Thus ruining his game with ‘em ladies? It's been three days. Have you managed to pull yourself up of the floor yet, and reassemble your molecules out of that pile of goo? ![[Linked Image]](http://cosgan.de/images/midi/konfus/c085.gif) FATE: But I'm still gonna win.
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FATE: *punches Zara* (turns to Clark) Just ignore her. Carry on ... Fate’s not playing fair, huh? Michael
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Nothing.  It didn't happen, Michael. No matter how much you've wanted it since the prologue, it didn't happen. It’s like I’ve read a different story… . . . I think maybe you did! LOIS: Oh no it wouldn't! <does not share well> Bit possessive, much, Lois? Well, this is Clark 'Superman' Kent. Wouldn't you be possessive? I know I am. Hide all Dan's Hawaiian shirts? Thus ruining his game with ‘em ladies? Oh, yeah. Cause it's the hawaiian shirts that attract all the ladies to him. *nods* FATE: But I'm still gonna win.
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FATE: *punches Zara* (turns to Clark) Just ignore her. Carry on ... Fate’s not playing fair, huh? Michael Fate never plays fair.
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Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you."
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Well, this is Clark 'Superman' Kent. Wouldn't you be possessive? I know I am. Well…actually… Oh, yeah. Cause it's the hawaiian shirts that attract all the ladies to him. *nods* See? He’s so the 80s beach boy. /sends Fate into corner and hopes this won’t come back with a haunting/ Michael
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