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Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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Things are already starting to change. I see Lois wasn't as strongly pheromoned this time as the last and was able to control herself in front of the Kents. Loved the image of Lex in an orange jumpsuit.  Don't know what he's going to do next. Out of everyone, he's the loose cannon in this story.
VirginiaR.
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Hi Virginia,
Thanks fpr the FDK!
Lois didn't receive a direct exposure. It was sort of second-hand this time.
If you recall this episode, Lex doesn't have a very big part.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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Let the games begin!
A mugshot of Lex in an orange jumpsuit? Priceless!
The byplay between LnC and their co-workers was funny. Come on, the thought of Lois relaxing is a little hard to accept.
It is so much better watching Lois and Clark working as a team rather than him trying to hide his abilities. Although the memory of her sloshing around the tub trying to grab her binox was funny!
Bring up Luthor while they were enjoying the heart shaped tub was a limitless strange on Clark's part. Couldn't they have talked about him while they were packing?
Other than that, good job!
Morgana
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Hi Morgana,
Thanks for the FDK!
Talking about Luthor keeps getting put off. He needs to get it out there. In this case it caused Lois to look outside and spot the Congressman.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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If you recall this episode, Lex doesn't have a very big part. Correction: Lex is a loose cannon in this universe.
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Virginia,
You have no idea.
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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