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FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251525 12/15/13 08:44 AM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Comments go here. Hope you enjoyed it. KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

Re: FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251526 12/15/13 11:38 AM
Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA mozartmaid Top Banana
mozartmaid Top Banana Joined: Jun 2010 Posts: 1,200 Boston, MA	Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.

Re: FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251527 12/16/13 12:41 AM
Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,531 Likes: 6 Brazil - RS Ultra Woman Pulitzer
Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,531 Likes: 6 Brazil - RS	Hehe! The trip down memory lane was fun! Thanks for the laugh! Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251528 12/16/13 09:22 AM
Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA LMA Top Banana
LMA Top Banana Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 1,466 USA	Really enjoyed your story--and appreciated the extra bit of background info you provided at the beginning, thanks Quote “Come on Smallville. Smelly stuff ... for a girl ... no imagination.” Lois turned and flounced away. Clark caught up to her and stopped her again. “You take all the hot water when you shower, I’m just stopping you from taking all the soap too.” Loved all of the witty banter between them when they were young...really fun to read! This part was great Quote Lois felt her heart quicken strangely. Clark’s fingers gripping her arms were tight and strong. She felt short of breath and at that moment she noticed where they were stood. Clark’s eyes followed hers and he looked up to see the plant dangling above them. They glanced back down at each other in shock and stared, unable to move. Moving almost simultaneously they pushed away from each other. Really enjoyed them starting to discover each other...what a fun stage in their relationship Quote “I totally agree.” Lois felt herself drifting as Clark lowered his mouth once more. As they floated, slowly, up the stairs to the bedroom Lois wondered if she’d ever get Clark to actually wear his Christmas present. Great ending--perfect! Thanks for posting...Really enjoyed it! Laura "Where's Clark?" "Right here." ...two simple sentences--with so much meaning. ~Lois and Clark in 'House of Luthor'~

Re: FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251529 12/18/13 07:11 AM
Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner
VirginiaR Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2011 Posts: 9,509 USA	Cute! Great banter. I love how you capture their voices so well, especially here: Quote “Come on Smallville. Smelly stuff ... for a girl ... no imagination.” Lois turned and flounced away. Quote As they floated, slowly, up the stairs to the bedroom Lois wondered if she’d ever get Clark to actually wear his Christmas present. Oh, she has to know that he will... if only to have her take them off him. I loved the juxtaposition of the new WAFFY Christmas with the old bickering one. Fun! VirginiaR. "On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling" --- "clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.

Re: FDK: First Christmas (Smallville) 1/1 #251530 12/26/13 10:36 PM
Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England KatherineKent OP Top Banana
OP KatherineKent Top Banana Joined: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,020 England	Thanks to everyone who read and commented, Hopefully some of you noticed that you don't need to know anything about Smallville to enjoy the story. Quote Originally posted by mozartmaid: Thank you. I tried to make each flash back match in some way with the present. Glad you noticed that. Quote Originally posted by Ultra Woman: Hehe! The trip down memory lane was fun! Yeah, well. When you don't know a girl very well what's the easiest fall-back present. Quote Quote As they floated, slowly, up the stairs to the bedroom Lois wondered if she’d ever get Clark to actually wear his Christmas present. Oh, she has to know that he will... if only to have her take them off him. I loved the juxtaposition of the new WAFFY Christmas with the old bickering one. Fun! Thank you. Although there was always a little link between the present and the flashbacks they were otherwise very different because of the change from hate to love. Thanks to all the commenters. Merry Christmas, KatherineKent/Victoria Lois: "You put up with me for the same reason I put up with you. It's because I'm completely in love with you." Clark: "And I love you ... Did we just make up?" Lois: "I think so."

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