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OK, if I'm honest, this is the chapter I care the most about.  How do you feel about how I handled the barn scene and then the red-K??
Reach for the moon, for even if you fail, you'll still land among the stars... and who knows? Maybe you'll meet Superman along the way.
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I think you handled both scenes very well.  I really like what you are doing with Lois. 
Herb replied, “My boy, I never say … impossible.” "Lois and Clarks" My stories can be found herekj
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Originally posted by KenJ:
I’m a little unclear as to where we are. I thought there was more time between Chloe’s wedding and Lana going through the metamorphosis with the suit. Then Lex booby trapped her into absorbing the green K from the bombs on top of the DP building. Am I to assume that this chapter happened after the bomb incident and that the transfer of the green K to Davis cleared it from her system so that they could get back together?
I really like what you are doing with Lois. Lana's been gone for a few episodes when this story begins, as it only covers the last four episodes in Season 8. There are 4 episodes between Requiem (Lana absorbs the K) and Stiletto. Hope that helps! Thanks for reading! 
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Maid,
I think you missed the early part of my post. Arduous is not the word to go in that sentence. It should be amorous.
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Originally posted by KenJ:
Maid,
I think you missed the early part of my post. Arduous is not the word to go in that sentence. It should be amorous. Yep. Missed it. But it's fixed now.
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