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Most / o l d / fools / m y (me?)/ a p e(are) / fall / for / some / brainless / k n o c k o u t / with / all / the /
s u b s t a n c e / of / a / w h i pp e d / d a i r y/ p r o d u c t .
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------well it does not make grammatical sense to me but I can't think of anything else
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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You're very close, Laura...
Here's the U:
Most / o l _ / fools / m _ / a _ e / fall / for / some / brainless / _ n o c _ o u t / with / all / the /
substance / of / a / w h i _ _ e d / d a i r _ / _ r o d u c t .
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. 
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 Most old fools my age fall for some brainless knockout with all the substance of a whipped dairy product. Laura, if this is right you can have my go.  I only changed one word from your post. Tricia 
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Excellent! Perry says it in "Bob and Carol and Lois and Clark." I'll let Tricia and Laura duke it out for the winning prize.  Susan
You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie.
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. Most old fools my age
fall for some brainless knockout
with all the substance of a whipped
dairy product.
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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LOL we must have posted close together, I just posted and then saw that you posted too. I was replying while you posted. In all fairness you got it. You can go. I am out of quotes right now anyway. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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