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Hi, Great part.  Poor CK. He is so depress. He deserve to be happy. More soon, please. MAF  PS This FDK: belong to the story post early Kidnapped Part 17
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Yvonne,
this is very good
they are all feeling the tension - wanting to do what is right for Jon
more soon please
merry
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Oh, darn! Lost my comments in the crash.
Basically, I love the interaction between Clark and CK and CK and Bernie and Clark and Bernie. (I happen to love Bernie; can you tell?)
Great installment, with lots of humour interspersed throughout.
Looking forward to more,
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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OK, Yvonne, I'm in the comment thread, but where's the actual part? I think you need to repost. Please hurry! I love this story!
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Ooh, good part. Ck's becoming...normal, lol. Good. But he might be a fit parent enough take Jon home at some point.  Poor Lois and Clark. Jen
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Yvonne, It was so sweet seeing Clark and Jon together - I sort of hope they let Jon go with CK, but I feel so bad for Lois and Clark. I am glad they finally had another round of tests so they can compare Clark and CK's samples and find out what is wrong with Clark! I LOLed at the daffodil part. I loved CK's impression of Dr. Klein as opposed to Clark's impression of him. Such a great contrast. - Alicia 
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Great part. Too short though! Do you realize the repost repeats itself 3 times?!
Thanks for this story. I'm enjoying it very much.
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Hi Yvonne, Finally caught up on your story. I loved this part. It's nice to see CK becoming more at ease with his situation and happier too. Good that things are finally getting better for Lois and Clark and that they'll hopefully be able to have a baby of their own. As usual, you mix pathos with humour very well, so things never become too heavy. It's something I love about your writing.  Can't wait to see how you resolve things in the next part. Yours Jenni
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Lost my post in the crash too.  Since I commented right after Irene I said I liked the CK-Dr Klein-Clark interaction as well and that the dafodills bit made me . Avia (who actually believes that the server was so surprised she posted that it crashed)
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Yvonne Thanks for reposting! Another excellent part!  I'm glad that CK is aware of the stress Lois and Clark are under. It's good to see him trusting them more and more. And understanding that the situation isn't easy for them either. I can't wait to find out the difference between CK and Clark's sample. I'm looking forward to reading the next part. Tricia 
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I'm just loving this still.  I'm amazed by your ability to bring humor to painful situations and gradually lighten the tone of the piece as we come out of the dark and into the light. (I realize of course, since this is you, it could be another three months until the happy ending...but I'm in for the long haul!) Can't wait. More, please! Sherry
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Yvonne, will you be posting part 18 soon? Please? Pretty please? Avia ![[Linked Image]](http://www.stopstart.fsnet.co.uk/mica/face.gif)
"I get it, you're a ghost. You're dead. Big accomplishment, move on. You see a light anywhere? Go towards it okay?"
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Yvonne Please don't keep us waiting too long. Tricia
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Hey, Tricia and Avia! I'm really sorry I haven't posted any more Kidnapped lately, but I've just got a bit stuck with it and RL has been more demanding than usual. I hope to get back on top of things in the next day or so. Yvonne
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