Hi Kathy:
Wow, that looks great and I haven't read it. Yes, it would be great to see it finished, but sadly that's not the one I'm thinking of.
The one I'm thinking of is in the third person. Clark starts out in the Apollo amidst a thunder and lightning storm and he reflects on why he can't help any more. He remembers the gal in the past in a hotel on the Riviera and how she came on to him and turns out to be a criminal.
Thanks for the tip, though.
regards
Artemis
who is struggling with my muse to finish "Nighttime in the Daytime"