Hiya all.
Well I am not a writer. I've said that countless times. Though, today I found myself board at work and I started writing. ME WRITING. Egads. The world is now spinning in the opposite direction. Well, I just though of what I'd be doing if I was in the bullpen in the Daily Planet and not at the McDonald's kiosk in the Casino feeling like a big looser like I'm in a Simpson's cartoon skit: "would you like fries with that," I say as my voice cracks.
(I stood alone in this "mini" McDonald's and I didn't have a customer for 30 minutes. It is often dead there during the day. I usually work at the main restaurant in the Casino, but I had to go there and do some time...ack.)
I wrote something small. It's lame. I've never written anything Lois and Clarkish beyond two sentences, so I was wondering if anyone would BR it for me.
I might post it. Depending if the BR didn't fall asleep while reading it thus unable to e-mail me their response.
Is it mildly intesting?
Is my tense THAT bad?
Is there a point or is it just ungided babbling?
Me - thumbelina_ilu@hotmail.com
Thanks everyone.
Roo