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YAY!!!! All's well that ends well.. cool! This was an awesome story and I enjoyed every page. I love this universe! Whenever you are ready to post more from this world, I will be waiting with bated breath.

Still trying to catch up, but loving every word of it!

Ditto on this universe. Love it and want more of it.

James

Nan, you've done it again. Everytime I think you couldn't improve on your stories, you surprise me with things like this one!

I sooooo hope that there is a followup story to this one.

Man, is that Candy character annoying. I hat to admit it, but I didn't feel one bit of sorrow over her getting a strong dose of reality or the way she got it. Please tell me that she gets a life after this?

I was really expecting one of those parasites to show up since the computer said that there were two of them on the planet. I was thinking "that sounds like the kind of thing that Nan will throw at us later.", but you didn't, and so you fooled me again.

Do you have any stories involving Animal Telepathy? Just curious.

I only have one niggle...

How is the disappearance of the students going to be explained to the parents?

James

That would be something that the Underground would take care of on a fairly regular basis for a great many of its recruits. Let's say that Terran Military Intelligence would probably let them know by roundabout methods -- after the Jils finished snooping around.

As for the Skelzir globes, one of them does show up on Midgard in a later story, but that one will have to be re-written at a later date, because my sister had the only draft of it, and when she got married it vanished: misplaced somewhere, no doubt. She says she may try to recreate the story eventually. I hope she does, because she wrote the plot to it, and it was a doozy.

Nan

Doozy? I like doozies!

James