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Nan,

I like this universe, your worlds are just so well developed and I like the way that you have thought out how the ways the colonies have adapted. I also find that your characters are well developed, they are real ppl with personalities... I am thouroughly enjoying these jaunts into your reality. More when you can get it out please.

Bumpkin said it best.

Your characters are real people. I feel like I could turn a corner and meet them.

Nice little historical POV.

James

Well written, Tara. The world reminds me very much of the compelling works of Sharon Lee and Steve Miller, except of course that the story has a solid ending.

Elisabeth

Actually Linda and I wrote this one. Tara wrote Company Coming. But thank you. This one was written basically in order to give a brief but easily understood premise for the series. Jeremy Burke, a few years older, makes an appearance in The Crystal Demon later in the series, as well.

Nan

Oops! I was leaving feedback for Company Coming while James and I read Mousetrap. (Mental note: Must leave feedback for Tara when it's not an hour past my bedtime.)

I enjoyed this one, as well. The plot moves so smoothly throughout the story that it's difficult to put down. It ties up all of the little details without projecting what the story is going to be. Well done.

Elisabeth