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Hi, Great part. 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Sorry I missed posting on part 4, Nan - as you can imagine, my time is limited these days...  Anyway, still enjoying this very much indeed. And I see Lois has worked out that Superman has a secret identity - fascinating! Now, how long will it take her to figure out that her partner has a few things in common with her hero, hmmm?  Loved the way you described Clark's encounter with the clone. And then a lovely scene with Lois and Superman - they're really starting to work as a partnership, which has to give Lois a few more clues, really. I mean, he can't help but slip into Clark-mode under those circumstances...  Looking forward to more!! Wendy 
Just a fly-by! *waves*
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yeah, what Wendy said  I read this earlier and didn't have time to comment, but I'm really enjoying this story. It's amazing the possibilities that open up once Lois gets suspicious of Lex... The encounter with the clone was great. And in that last scene I was wondering which Superman was visiting Lois! <g> But your characterization of the clone was pretty distinct, so I didn't wonder for long. Anyway... more, more! PJ
"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."
--Stardust, Caroline K
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Ditto to everyone else's comments! I want more! Jen
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Nan Another excellent part! Tricia 
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more! 
"Practice up your shielding spells...and remember to duck if you see green light coming your way." Harry Potter to Wizengamot in OotP trial A Bad Week in the Wizengamot
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So, Nan, a while back I read this really awesome story called "Pheromone, More Likely". I was enjoying it immensely while reading and then I got to the end and found that horrible tbc  . I have to admit I was mad at you for a minute or so , especially when I found out that you hadn't written the 'continued' part yet. Now, you have my rapt attention. And I'm waiting (almost) patiently for that ton of bricks to fall on Lois. It's gotta come soon, right?  I love what you've done so far! Can't wait for the next part. Sara
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Nan, I am loving this story! Sorry for the lack of comments earlier, but RL and Non-FOLC on-line life is chewing up my time.
James
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