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to the bloodied pocket of Luthor's "Well...what do we have..."  LoveSuper, you need to make sure your section matches up with the previous one posted. As it stands, your addition makes no sense, as you can see above. LabRat 
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.
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Labrat I think I now where lovesuper was going with that. I think it was ment for Cat to say that. so Lovesuper next time you may want to say whose saying what ( yeah I know kinda hard when you only have 5 words lol.) so if we're keeping that I'll start again "Well...what do we have... here?" Cat said as she... Lisa
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sorry labrat
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Labrat I think I now where lovesuper was going with that. I think it was ment for Cat to say that. Oh, I fully realised it was meant to be dialogue, Lisa. But it still makes no sense, no matter who is speaking the dialogue. You need to complete the sentence 'to the bloodied pocket of Luthor's' before you add any dialogue. Luthor's what?  That's a gap which needs to be filled. LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
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/me pulls out his shoehorn...
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the startled guru. "Wait!" he
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Aramis: Yes, sorry.
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turned obsolete when I found
- I'm your partner. I'm your friend.
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how close you and Lex [edit: removed a word - very hard number is 5  ]
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