Originally posted by VirginiaR:
Originally posted by Marcus Rowland:
[b] Until I saw the kid's name I was expecting the ship to go through some sort of time warp and end up in the distant past, in a town called Smallville.
Me, too.[/b]Me three. That happened in an Elseworlds comic, actually. Um, I was going to tell which one, but I guess that would be spoilers.
Cute story. I like the way you used other DC planets, races, and technology. I also like how you incorporated the science related to the stars themselves. I studied astronomy in college, so it's fun to see stellar evolution used as a plot device.
The whole thing left me a bit melancholy, though. I can only hope that Kallie finds new parents as great as the Kents.