Sara, I adore this story! Primarily because it's got such spark, and naturally, I'm a huge believer that Lois has been in love with Clark for a while, but the very idea of it angers her to no end. I particularily like the fact that you're developing the cannon of the show as you progress through the story. Smooth, as First Season Jimmy might say :rolleyes: .
Poor Clark! All he wants to do is talk to her, but everytime he gets the courage, 'Help! Superman!' is echoed through his mind.
And since he isn't talking, we're reading no smoochies, and that is never a good thing!
I'm enjoying this very much, and am excited to read the next part.
-Jo
