This was a very good opening chapter.

Lex's determination to capture Arianna in the hopes of making everything right was spot on. We all know him as the man who hates Superman and loves Lois Lane. In the conclusion of 'Further' he must try to make peace with Superman and Ultra Woman! It will be interesting to see knkow all that is resolved. Your interpretation of the character is refreshing and fun.

Now regarding Rebecca. The young woman's personality and character has evolved from being merely 'a receptionist' at LexCorp. But honestly it is hard to believe she would throw herself so shamelessly at Clark especially knowing he is still newly widowed and that he might be in love with his partner Lois.

Even Clark is trying to figure out just where she falls in his life. In some regards, she is almost as pushy as Lana.

Anyhow, I having a LOT of fun reading this story and look forward to additional installments! wave

Morgana

A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.