bakasi The coffee boy, huh? Any chance that he might be the elusive Mr. Calvin what's-his-name?
Close!
Laura Yeah, the coffee boy is rather obnoxious. But sometimes those characters are fun to write - and hopefully fun to read.
DW Hilarious and sad -
Jackie I think that when Clark saw Lois dancing with the coffee boy, it probably felt like the low point in a very bad day.
Mouserocks Clark's smile - I figure that by halfway through the second season, even Clark has to have worked out that his smile has an effect on Lois.
Iolanthe Would I mock Superman's hair gel?
Mpj Poor Clark. Perhaps things will get better for him.
DC Thanks for all the comments - they were as entertaining as the story
Emily I *did* fix it!
Evelyn Chuckling and groaning - that's a good combination!
Is 'flyblown' Australian? We *do* have more than our fair share of flies!
Morgan Yep, he got upstaged. Sometimes, life just isn't fair.
Michael Corrina will definitely go two-digits with this.
Not quite!
He could send it again. Trying to test whether it's his question that's killing servers.
Now *that* would be
Thanks to everyone for the FDK. I got a few laughs out of this fic - I enjoyed sharing it with you.
Corrina.