Hi,
I was happy to see part 3 posted.
Your story is very intriguing with lots of additional characters.
I liked the interlude into Clark's past. And Martha's answer to Ida Schultz was just so in character. In my mind, I could hear and see Martha speaking.
And now we have two strong women in your story. Lois and Aykira. I'm looking forward to seeing how that 'relationship' pans out. Lois doesn't like being fobbed off, though she seems to respect Aykira.
Lots of strings to this story and I'm looking forward to seeing how it developes.
Glad to hear you have a posting schedule.
Yours Jenni
