Well done. So many times in fanfiction (and the series, too!) Lois or Clark goes through something horrific and then they seem to bounce back immediately like nothing really happened. Seeing Lois get sick, break down and cry, and then storm out mad -- now that seems more reasonable. No one could walk away from her experience without some serious issues. And they're going to take a long time to get under control.

I know Clark is feeling guilty, but he really is doing well by Lois. He shares his home, his food, his clothing, his family, his time and listens intently. There's really not more he could have done.

Keep it up.
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