Popcycle, anyone? I need to cool off. (We need a smiling face fanning itself, to express my feeling after reading this part). Whew!

It was sweet that Clark insisted on a ceremony, despite the paperwork. Were you tempted to fly them off to Vegas at one point and just said 'nah' they don't need Vegas?

You have the art of the slow seduction. Every detail mapped out, spine tingling. The reader feels what the character feels. You are an inspiration to the rest of us... at least to me. smile1 Thank you.

VirginiaR.
"On the long road, take small steps." -- Jor-el, "The Foundling"
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"clearly there is a lack of understanding between those two... he speaks Lunkheadanian and she Stubbornanian" -- chelo.