Thanks for the feedback, Joan. I can easily see Clark as a protective father; especially of his daughters.
I've never worked with a beta, so I'll see if it works out. thanks for the advice.
Jenna: "That's enough! You release the Charactors from this tragedy right now, you little gnome. Or I promise to send you somewhere far worse than the fifth dimension!"
Kazbo sarcastically: "You have me so scared!" menacing: "try dealing with this!" throws in a slow, agonising death. then disappears.
-from an arguement with Kazbo, the evil muse
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