I love where this is going! It's nice to see them recapture so much of what they had in the cell. I love your whole story, but the parts when they were together in his cell were some of the most poignant and moving.
The portrayal of Clark's fear through Lois's eyes was really touching, as was his fear that she would leave him. I like her thoughts about how she destroyed the trust she had worked so hard to build, because I have to admit I was thinking something along the same lines.
I'm so glad she's beginning to feel a bit more--and that she said she wouldn't leave tomorrow. I just hope they both realize pretty soon--or when the time is right, of course--that tomorrow can easily turn into forever.
