I like the way you handled getting Lois as Superman's next of kin.
This cracked me up:
He sounded far more sincere today. Maybe he wasn’t as bad as Clark had thought. Then she shook herself. What was she thinking?!
Sometimes even the smartest people are fooled. But I'm glad she didn't fall for it.
Love the blow up with Lex. Personally I don't you even needed the justification of the meds - the trauma she'd been through would've be more than enough. But the med side effect works too.
Glad to hear more about the Kryptonite bullets. Can't wait to see how you have Superman get out of this one.
Joan
