I'm reposting my comments, whether you like it or not, Yvonne. laugh

While I've enjoyed the entire story, I feel you've painted Lois and Clark as the protagonists, and CK as the antangonist - one that readers sympathized with, to be sure, but still the troublemaker.

And then part 11 came along and, wow, suddenly CK's plight came into full focus, and he was Clark again.

Excellent job - looking forward to where you're going with this ... I can see this possibly becoming even more angst-ridden than some of your other work, which I did not think was possible. thumbsup

Elle Roberts

She's a dancer who doesn't dance. He's a painter who doesn't paint. It's like a bohemian version of the Island of Misfit Toys. – “Igby Goes Down”