Ooh. More comments. Cool!

Deja Vu, I hope you're still excited when you see what happens next. And thanks for picking out all those subtle humor lines, especially the one between Chen and Clark. It always puzzled me that Chen claimed to know Clark because they used the same optometrist when Clark's glasses are nothing more than camouflage. Maybe Chen knows "the secret," maybe he doesn't.

Don't worry, Mozartmaid, Clark will find out - just not right away. Remember that package with the little black bat on it?

Thanks for hanging with me, Tank. I'm not trying to portray Diana as evil, just consumed with ambition and willing to bend her principles to achieve her goal. And that's always a problem for anyone.

Next chapter up in moments!


Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.

- Stephen King, from On Writing