Plain Jane-- Thanks!
Since I haven't seen to the end of the 4th seson, my roommate (who started my L&C addiction) had to explain how the name came into play. But even without that knowledge, it was excellently explained.
Haha. Well, I am glad you had someone to explain it to you!
Kathy-- Glad you liked the Arthurian stuff and the felling of bad guys by their own bad karma, heh.
I did have fun using the Rumplestiltskin story, I must say!
Your point about L&C is well taken. I guess I have a problem knowing when something is banter and when something has slightly more sinister undercurrents, it seems, as I definitely didn't intend for Loisette to come off badly (or for Clarkent to seem like a doormat). For the archive version, I'll definitely work on the places you mentioned in this chapter and try to figure out if I can do any softening in other chapters. If you also notice anything along these lines in the epilogue, please let me know.
Thanks for the good test-taking vibes! I will need all of that which I can get!
Michael-- Guess I still have some bumps to work out.
Thanks for the feedback!
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Thank you muchly for feedin' back again, you three!
Deja
