Aha! I thought he might experience some of his pains with Lois around--but how nice that Lois gave him a backrub
But at the same time, Clark can't hang out in this timeline with Lois forever. It's obviously having consequences for him...
I like some of the ideas you guys are posting... what if Clark from this timeline sees the news and goes to investigate?! That could get very interesting...
But I also noticed you posting that you don't have that many more parts to post... can't you extend it a bit more? This story could go in so many intriguing directions!
Anyway, however you work it out, looking forward to the next part!