Awesome start. I really loved the other story. I have read it a few times despite the length. I loved that it was so long. Felt like I was reading a book. I was amazed that you were able to pull off getting them together. After what Lois had been through, I didnt think it was possible. I really hope that they can get the help Lois needs so that they can have a wonderful, loving, and happy life. I hate that Kal is tormenting her again. I like the idea that they may still be connected. I hope that Clark and some of the other clarks can go and destroy evil Kal. He needs to be stopped. Look foreward to reading more updates. Hope that you will be able to keep inspiration to finish this story.
