Too short! Far too short!
But you've captured Watson's voice most accurately. And I laughed at his brush-off of Doyle's fiction. So very Watson!
I agree with Marcus that Holmes' time travel deduction was quite a leap just from the fabric of Clark's clothing, but combined with Wells' time travel story and the material in and style of Clark's glasses (I'm surprised he's still wearing them) it's a logical - if very imaginative - conclusion.
Glad you're posting daily, Lynn. I'm ready for tomorrow's chapter!
