Nan, we'll let you know if we start to think that this story is going too long smile Thirty more parts, for instance, might possibly be too much. Then again, maybe not.

Two favorite moments: Henderson sounding so bland and disinterested and Lois's growing understanding of his facade. Also, when Superman catches up with Lois and asks if they can work together on this, and she immediately feels better. Nice.

Okay, plus I love the change in Lex's voice when the "invisible" door opens all by itself...

Best wishes to your brother, and you too.

PJ

"You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed.
He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement."
"You can say that again," she told him.
"I have a...."
"Oh, shut up."

--Stardust, Caroline K